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Reviews for Happy Birthday

By : SquirrelySango
  • From ANON - Xen on March 10, 2005
    Oh... And for Anon: My bra easily comes off in such situations. It's all about detachable bra straps, baby.

    Although last week one of them came undone when I didn't mean for it too. That was a little awkward... Oops.
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  • From ANON - Xen on March 10, 2005
    Yay! There needs to be more Miro/San kinky bondage smut around. *nodnod* Definitely! Write more of it :D
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  • From ANON - kyahigurashi90 on September 10, 2004
    *clear throat* no comment.................just.........uhhhhh.................write more!!
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  • From ANON - Sango fan! on July 16, 2004
    Awesome fanfic! and very funny as well! I love mirokusingsinging! lol
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 24, 2004
    You really need to pay attention to what you are writing and posting.

    First of all, chapter two is posted twice, once as chapter two and again
    as chapter three.

    Second, you have Sango handcuffed, then tied but Miroku manages, but some
    miracle to get her bra off and throw it across the room. Think about it. Physically
    impossible.

    Third, don't post those little comments in ( ) in the middle of the paragraph. Very
    annoying. You have something to say, do it at the beginning or end of the chapter.

    A beta reader would help catch one of these mistakes. The posting mistake is your
    responsibility.
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