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Reviews for My secret mate

By : sesshomarufangirl
  • From kogaluver on April 19, 2005
    Totally hot and sexy. I like that you've added Koga and Ayame too. And now you've brought the swords in. Great! However, I may be slow, but I really didn't quite grasp the history you were trying tell about them. Could you clarify it a little more in the next chappie ^_^ Another great chapter, thanks!
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  • From on April 19, 2005
    That was great chapter! Can't wait to read more! Well update soon!
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  • From ANON - ichie-chan(too lazy to sign in) on April 18, 2005
    this was good and finally u updated!! please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Zephyr on April 18, 2005
    This is a really good story. I love the concept and the characterization. The only thing you might wanna work on is punctuation and spacing. Like in Chapter Two. The entire thing is bunched together in one long paragraph, which makes it difficult for the reader to keep track of where they are. Have you thought of getting a beta? There are bunches of us just waiting for stories over on http://groups.yahoo.com/group/AFFBetaReaders . We're always looking for stories. You might wanna think about it.

    Other than that, excellent job! I love it!

    **Zeph**
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  • From ANON - Nightclaw42 on April 17, 2005
    Great chapter, though I noticed a blooper. After Inuyasha has tied his hands and is riding him, you wrote that Sess grabbed his hips. Afterwards Inuyasha untied his hands. You need to fix that inconsistincy. Other then that the chapter was VERY HOT and really good.
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  • From ANON - Naraku Lover on April 07, 2005
    Oh My God! That was good...I don't usually read these type of stories(INUYASHA). I know, I know its a crime...but please, PLEASE UPDATE!!! ^____^
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  • From ANON - maria on March 17, 2005
    awesome story its getting very interesting. keep it up. update next chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - Lady Aqualyne (Too Lazy To Sign In ) on March 14, 2005
    YAY I like this story. I think I am becoming as addicted to Inu/Sess stories as I am Yu Yu Hakusho stories based on Kurama and Hiei being a couple. This one ROCKED. You have to update soon. I wanna know what happens, when will we get to see them tell about the pup coming into the world? And I wanna see Sess and Inu spar. How cute!
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  • From on February 26, 2005
    About time you updated!!!! I loved this chapter, and I hope Inu-chan makes more friends, I don't think being lonely is good for the baby!!!! Well update soon, and myabe have a lemon in the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - ichie-chan on December 22, 2004
    this is really good!! update soon!!!
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  • From on November 02, 2004
    I loved your update and can't wait to read the next one! And believe me I know how you feel about school talking up most of your time cause I feel the same way! Wellate ate soon!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - amy on November 01, 2004
    update update update!!!THAT IS THE KEY WORD!so please for the luv of any god!!PLEASE UPDATE THIS FANTASTIC FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • From on September 25, 2004
    Oh this chapter was good! Update faster and can you email me when you update! Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Golden on September 24, 2004
    Omg!!! It's wonderful!!!! Inuyasha looks so sexy in blue *.* BUT OMG!!! WHAT AN EVIL CLIFFHANGER!!!!!! .o.o. Update this soon!!! Really soon please!!!!! I really love this fic a lot you just HAo upo update it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

    TTFN! Ta Ta For Now!
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  • From ANON - nekoyasha213 on September 23, 2004
    hi wow it was worth the wait for that chapter i really hope you update soon and good luck with the rest of the story
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