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Reviews for Kagome: Goddess of Japan

By : jeffshelton
  • From sesshysbitch74 on July 07, 2007
    Well this story is interesting enough but what the hell happened between the end of Kagome's Return and the beginning of this one??? This is so weird with all the new stuff and not knowing what has happened just makes it more confusing. It would be super awesome if you could do a chapter or two just roughly outlining the first few years or so of their lives how they made that whole threesome thing work and sango and miroku and if kagome ever saw her family again. It seems like you were trying to do little history lessons in some of the chapters but without the whole story its just hard to understand. I don't know I hope I don't come off as being a flamer, just telling you what I think so far. I am still dying to know what Kagome has in store for her daughter the one with Sango's soul so hurry and post!!

    Much love,
    Lady Fluffy
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on December 29, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - PokinTheBunny on January 26, 2006
    I really really like this story and I am quite intrested to see where your going to take it. Never tone down the amount details you want to put in; they're what make you a really good writer and your stories incredible and hard to break away from. I just love the way you write, and in all of the stories that I read of yours.. you never take the plot where I think its going. Its never, ever predictable. I love that. I can't wait for more chapters to come out on this!
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  • From ANON - Kilroy on January 26, 2005
    DUDE! FRIKING AWESOME!
    Love your stoires, Jeffs. Long and have a great depth. You should consider a career in writing.

    'Duty is heavier than a mountain, Death lighter than a feather'

    Wasn't that from teh Wheel Of Tiem by Robet Jordan? Or soem japense cultural reference thing?

    WRITE WRITE WRITE! Please. HAHAHA!

    Thank you for your time.

    SqurielLord
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  • From ANON - kalaong on December 06, 2004
    The characterization in your fics is perfect. I can easily see all the actions that each of them has taken throughout your alternate history.
    The politics, however, remind me very much of Frank Herbert's Dune series- an existing heirarchy is toppled and replaced by an individual through a combination of personal power and religious fervor. However, can I turn your attention to a certain essay about this situation in another work of fiction? http://www.geocities.com/Paris/6790/truth.html
    One can wander the fictional world of a CRPG with impunity once one has reached level 99, but in a real world every force must eventually meet a greater one.
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  • From ANON - Bill the Surly on October 19, 2004
    This story bothers me in many, many ways. Kagome for one, while she was a utter Mary Sue in the first two installments, is now a completely unredemable one in Kagome: Goddess of Japan Secondly... Sesshoumaru stated in Kagome Where are you? that he couldn't abandon Rin because she called him "Papa" in her sleep. Which to me suggests a fatherly affection...Now he's married? her and fathered childern by her. While it's not actually incest, it's definetly emotion incest. Not cool. And honestly, is there anyone that hasn't fucked everyone? 500 years is a long time.. but.. geez.

    Another point is, I don't see Sesshoumaru bowing to anyone. Even a "goddess". I'm all for A/U, but really this is closer to original fiction that anything that could be considered Inuyasha.
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  • From ANON - theMaven on October 18, 2004
    Interesting chapter. I've never thought of Heaven in quite that capacity, lol, and the thing with the tiles was very nice.
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  • From ANON - Jen on October 10, 2004
    I love It So far. Write More Soon. I can't wait to read it

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  • From ANON - Cammerz on September 29, 2004
    Ok. Is there anyway you can revive the Kagome/Sesshoumaru/Inuyasha triangle? Or at least mend the Kagome/Sesshoumaru relationship? Because, no matter what, they ARE consorts with each other, or at least lovers. And I would think that since Sesshoumaru and Kagome don't age the same way as humans do, their feelings won't change as quickly either. For example, a man might tire of his mistress for after a year or two, but that is taking into consideration he only lives seventy years or so. And, when they make their journey in 'Kagome! Where Are You' it gives me the impression that they have shared a very strong bond, one that, no matter how many Rins and dead Jakens appear, will not be broken, though tested.
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  • From ANON - theMaven on September 28, 2004
    I'm enjoying the fic so far, but I have to admit that I find the biographies of the characters more interng tng than the current storyline. I suppose it's because the bios focus on the people, as individuals, while the story seems to focus more on the setting, meaning, this is Kagome's world and this is what goes on it. I must say that I DO like how the threesome became a foursome, and now, even that is becoming unstable. All apologies, but, in my opinion, Kagome was NEVER the correct female for Sess; he needs someone who's WILLING to play submissive to his dominant personality, and that's just not who Kagome is, as several of your fics have already proven.

    I also like the alternative history you've set up for this fic, and I wonder what's going to happen at this parade. I hope there will be more interaction between the individual characters as the fic goes onke bke between Kagome and Inu, Sess and Kagome, Kagome and Kiyoko and Inu and Kiyoko. I realize the fic is supposed to be more about the alternate universe Kagome has established and what life is like in that universe, but keep in mind that the majority of the people who read fanfiction, read it to see familiar characters interacting with each other as they set off on an adventure of the author's making. As always, your descriptions are precise without being overly wordy, and you keep your characters true to their nature.

    I look forward to your next update on this fic, as well as the next installment of "A Shard in Kyoto."

    --theMaven :)
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  • From ANON - Kellie on September 28, 2004
    Here's my honest opinion on your story. I like this story. Its original, more detailed than any other stories that I've ever read. I've read every chapter and this is the first time I'm reviewing this story. Before you had the Sesshoumaru and Rin chapter, I read the sexual history of each character, and I really don't understand it and didn't care much for it. But other than that, I love the story. Thankyou for writing this story and I'll continue reading it (I'll just skim over the sex scenes, not because I don't like it, but because I'm just having a hard time picturing Inuyasha with other characters). ^__^
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  • From ANON - mofaf on September 28, 2004
    poor Kagome...she really wants some time with Ses. Hope she gets some time with him (not a big Rin/Ses fan...sorry)
    of course seeing her with Inu is good too. too bad about the upcoming war she will be very upset
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  • From ANON - mofaf on September 23, 2004
    Great Chappie....hmmmm....wonder how Inu and Ses get along with Kagome's lovers....and how Kagome gets along with their mistresses. not nothing happens to hurt anyone else besides Kagome.....since she can protect herself the enemy might try attacking peoploselose to her in order to hurt her emotionally.
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  • From ANON - Biggles on September 14, 2004
    Nice start, and a good thing you reviewed a bit. Willp slp set the pace of the story line.
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  • From ANON - drake220 on September 14, 2004
    um, i don't mean to be petty or anything but is this a ses/kag? i know i know, it won't focus on the actual character romantic pairings but i'm curious
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