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Reviews for The Princess Recalls Her One Adventure

By : Gyousei
  • From ANON - Dee Dee on December 26, 2006
    Wow!! And is Kagome fat? I just can't believe it! Oh well. Hope you update soon!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Valkyrie on January 21, 2006
    Woo hoo! So exciting! I love this story! So, does Sesshomaru like her? I know he thinks she's dimwitted, but he was being rather un-Sesshomaru like when it came to the topic of Kagome. Love the story, love your descriptions of Naraku and Sango (especially Sango)! Keep going, you're doing a fabulous job!
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on October 19, 2005
    An interesting tale, sir. Can't wait to see more. Will Shippo be making an appearance? Or possibly Rin? Everyone else has gotten into this stpry, anyway. Laters.
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  • From ANON - snowfall on May 15, 2005
    I love your writing style. Such wit and humor. First person seems to come easy for you. Very interesting and funny story.

    Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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  • From Firered on May 02, 2005
    Oh PLEASE update. Obviously, I luv this story
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  • From SoutasSister on May 01, 2005
    I've been following your story and I hope you update again soon. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Kid ^_^ on February 16, 2005
    That was good! Ack! Must read more! @_@ Please update!!!!!! >_
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  • From ANON - Please continue! on January 09, 2005
    Well, I thought you had updated when I saw this come back up in the Inuyasha list. I hope to read another chapter soon because I like this story. Please update! Thanks!
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  • From ANON - vashta on January 01, 2005
    No, I geussed wrong. Good deal, too many are predictable. I like it when I can't tell what is going to happen before it happens! I am not even going to assume anything about who she ends up with. Update please!
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  • From ANON - Interested Reader on January 01, 2005
    Please update soon! Thanks!
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  • From ANON - sublimetrickster on December 31, 2004
    Hey, read your story. Sounds good so far, I like the idea and enjoy your version of Kagome. It's true she wasn't as put together in the beginning as she is now. Heh, like how you snuck Sesshoumaru in there.

    There was a bit of a confusing part in the second chapter where Miroku compares "Kagamiko" to Princess Kagome. She blushes at compliment way after the compliment happens. I think you might want to think of changing that around a bit. Also, a bit more description of setting and people would be helpful. Sure we know the characters, but you are colouring them as yours so you should describe them how you see them. We meet Inuyasha, but the only way we know that is because of what he says. We're seeing this from Kagomes veiw, so we should be seeing Inuyasha when she does and how she does, otherwise it feels like there is a giant blind spot over him.

    Keep up the good work and I hope my constructive criticism helps!!
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  • From ANON - Jen on October 17, 2004
    This story was great. I hope that i can read more very soon!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - vashta on October 16, 2004
    I can only assume who the Rider is, good start. Waiting for an update.
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