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Reviews for Benifits of plight

By : Cri
  • From ANON - foxykittykat on May 18, 2005
    wonderful! update really soon! hey can you check out my challenge (inuyasha/sesshomaru/kouga challenge) andlet me know what you think. i hope you might consider accepting it. update!
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  • From ANON - foxy_kitty_kat2000 on May 15, 2005
    so sesshomaru's in love with inuyasha too? you have to update soon! hey what if sesshomaru tried to convince inuyasha to stay with him and forget about miroku? just a suggestion. update soon!
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  • From ANON - kyou on May 14, 2005
    update soon
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  • From ANON - MorbidSparkles on May 13, 2005
    this is a great story, i need more nc-17 though
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  • From ANON - carol on May 01, 2005
    i like the story but i think you should every now and then go back to sesshomaru and inuyasha to let everyone in on whats been going on with them while what's happening to miroku. one more thing: i think your chapters should be a little longer.
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  • From ANON - joy on April 22, 2005
    oooo... interestin

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  • From ANON - Zafiro carrillo on April 04, 2005
    i want this fic to be inuyasha/Sesshomaru and naraku/miroku please make this fic be a inuyasha/Sesshomaru and naraku/miroku
    i can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Baka Basu on April 03, 2005
    hey this is really good i liked to say the least
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  • From ANON - siarra on March 10, 2005
    pretty good. your spellings not great but you have a great story line. keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Kenyanboa on January 24, 2005
    Okay Okay, I got to know what Naraku does with Miroku! You got my attention! Please write another chapter!
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  • From ANON - sesshomaru_lover4evr on January 10, 2005
    i love it! now keep writing! I have to see what happens with naraku and miroku! (lemon fan)
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  • From bffimagine on January 04, 2005
    Uh oh... I don't know whether to wonder what happens next or feel to sorr for miroku to care! UPDATE!
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  • From ANON - gegadg on November 19, 2004
    I really like this fic. Please update anyway even if u dont get as many reviews as you wanted. You should write because u want to tell a story, not because of reviews! Anyway, please update the fic. I really want to know what happens to Miroku!
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  • From ANON - Khaula on November 14, 2004
    Ok, real criticism. Well, I like the basis of your story, however, the fow of your story seems a bit choppy. Try to make it smoother. At certain points, I think near the very beginning of this chapter, you have a couple of pelling errors. I would recommend reading through the first few passages and correcting them. Also, it seems a bit odd that Miroku, who is trying to be defend himself from further hurt would so easily trust a stranger, even if the stranger is kind. But the basic premise of your story is quite good. Update soon and please keep the pairing Inuyasha/Miroku, even though I am guessing and has already happened with Inuyasha, there will be rape scenes for which, obviously, the pairing will be different. But still try to stick to Inuyasha/Miroku as your pairing.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 09, 2004
    itwas very interesting bufeelfeel bad for miroku
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