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By : theMaven
  • From ANON - TAJE on January 15, 2005
    Whoa! Very dark indeed. You do this well! Keep on writing Maven! Keep on writing!
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  • From ANON - Persephone of Abydos on January 07, 2005
    I thoroughly enjoyed this fic, odd ending and all. In fact, I think the odd ending was what I liked best -- certainly a different ending for the two than most portray!
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  • From ANON - MidsummerDreamer on January 05, 2005
    This is abso-fucking-lutely wonderful. The thing I love most about this story is that, even though it contains such a heavy emotional issue like rape -- or at least Sesshomaru thinks it was rape -- you maintained this calm, almost clinical atmosphere, which, with any other character would be stupid, but it's perfect for Sesshomaru. The way he interacts with Rin (speaking, etc.) is so authentic. Somehow, the reader can tell just what his feelings are, even though he never once reveals them during their dialogue. The phrase still waters run deep comes to mind. The way he says "This will never happen again" and things like that is just so realistic. I really have to say, I think this is the best characterization of Sesshomaru I've ever encountered. Not to mention, Rin's blind devotion to Sesshomaru is simultaniously touching and just the least bit disturbing (after all, we're used to independant women like Kagome and Sango), and that contrast adds a totally new dimension to the story. I know this is just fan fiction, but I honestly think that if you could accomplish something like this with an original idea (you know, because of copyrights and all that), you would have a good chance of getting published. Bravo!
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  • From ANON - Wow123 on December 30, 2004
    Wow!!!!! I just so love your writing....please don't let the two idiots that knocked your piece get to you.....The first moron must have not read the story, and the other idiot didn't understand the story, and was not a Sess/Rin fan......All the real fans of Sesshomaru and Rin knows that Rin was meant to grown up and become Sesshomaru's mate...................Anyone who doesn't understand that simple logical can go somewhere.......Anyway, I'm a huge fan of your work....please keep the Sess/ Rin coming ...please!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Shadiyaray on December 28, 2004
    As always, you writing style never ceases to amaze me.
    I am always awarded a treat whenever I read your works.

    Shadiyaray
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  • From ANON - Idle Hands on December 28, 2004
    I, for one, find self-sacrifice, and the willingness to DO anything and ENDURE anything for the one you love QUITE romantic. I don't know what everybody else is looking for, though. Honestly, I think they're used to too many PWPs or this OOC bullshit where, in the span of a sentence, they turn Sess from his normally stoic self to a whiny Romeo who'll spew "I love you" at the drop of a hat. Feh!

    Given, it was a little extreme, but you promised darkness, and you delivered. Well done!

    And, Bill the Surly, everyone in the IY fanfiction community is familiar with the myth that, UNLESS OTHERWISE STATED, if a human mates with a demon, immortality is one of the perks.
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  • From ANON - Virlene on December 27, 2004
    Sorry, but I too do not find a story about a young girl being f*cked to unconciousness by her father figure who she then forgives and centuries later they both end up in hell together romantic.. Angsty and dark; yes. Romantic; no.

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  • From ANON - Deanna on December 27, 2004
    It wasn't rape you jerk. Did you even read the story?

    Anyway, Maven, great stuff.
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  • From ANON - Bill the Surly on December 25, 2004
    Eh, I'm having problems finding a rape fic romantic, to be bluntly honest. How is Rin "ageless" now? Does rape, maiming, and brutality extend a human's life in some manner in which I'm not aware?
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  • From ANON - Greaterbeast_xellas on December 23, 2004
    Great as always ^_^
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  • From ANON - New Fan on December 23, 2004
    This is one the greatest one-shoters I've read so far this year. You always out do yourself. Waiting to read
    House Divided.
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  • From ANON - Myownhappyending (nso) on December 23, 2004
    Wow. That was so tasteful and perfect. It was perfectly slow and not demeaning. Funny at times, and it actually made me cry. Beautifully written.
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  • From ANON - Zelix (Not logged on) on December 23, 2004
    Wow... now THAT was one hell of a one-shot, fucking brilliant! Wow, simply... wow. Though, i noticed there was mentioning of both Inuyasha and Kagome going through the same thing.... hmm, if you could do a one-shot about them too, just a suggestion though.

    Great fic, really great and i mean it.
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on December 23, 2004
    As always you "NEVER DISAPPOINT" me........it was sad but sweet...the fact that he wanted to be with her always it was great..........GOOD JOB AS USUAL.......BRAVO!!!!!!!BRAVO!!!!! BRAVO!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Nire-Neko-Sama on December 23, 2004
    Wow...*takes a breath*...
    That was fantastical...I always look foward to reading your stories because you ALWAYS amaze me...
    Yea...Yay!!! *jumps for joy*...I seriously LOVE the way Sesshomaru upholds himself in your stories...
    *claps hands* Uhm...
    Hm...Well good job as always Maven ^_^!!

    Nire (^_^)v
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