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Reviews for Moonlight's Shadow

By : northstar
  • From YoukaiObsessed on March 16, 2005
    Ohhs that was great!! Dark and hot!! Really nice job on this..!!! 0,0’
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  • From fallenangel7583 on March 16, 2005
    wow. i'm not sure where to begin. it's odd that i always come to terms with being lost for words at stories that are simply amazing. the sentence structure you have in this story is inspiring. the way your words flow together seems like something only a well accomplished novilist could entail. “Long dead and gone, yet her hatred was strong enough to reanimate this body of clay and bone. The hatred that I created!” he declared with smug triumph and a hint of pride. AMAZING!!! never, in a history of reading hundreds upon hundreds of fan fictions entries, have i read something so well written. your depictions of the charactes is so much on key that i can see it and it scares me to no end. Kagome's rationalization and ultimate sacrifice is perfect...you have put so much into this character and i do believe could even give the producers a run for their money. your naraku is so vile i simply want him dead. my skin crawls with each of his whispers to Kagome. i honestly am awestruck at the talent you have here. simply amazing. i really hope you continue with your endevor on this story, as i have stated, it is simply amazing. you are the only writer i have come across yet to actually touch on the fact that Naraku could impersonate InuYasha (most seem to forget that fact) and have utilized that to a bone chilling degree. and to have him touch her in such ways in that form...talk about a harsh dose of reality. also throwing Kagura in to help Kagome by removing the threat of Kikyo from the scene is also well done. i don't think i can stop raving about this fic...honestly.

    i really cannot wait to see how the rest of this fiction goes and can only pray that you have InuYasha save the day. keep up with the writing, it is so well done.
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  • From ANON - SesshysGirl on March 16, 2005
    this is a really good story. but i think that i fu get kagome pregnant with naraku's child, it would become more interesting. anyways, hope u keep writing...
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  • From ANON - Amanda on March 16, 2005
    *groans* God I love this story!! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Dragon_Lady on March 03, 2005
    Wow! That's really well written! It's so dark, and you keep Naraku and Kagome in character, too. I hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Soudesuka_Shurikens on February 24, 2005
    You sure know how to leave a fan wanting more. I was wishing i caught this story on the second chapter, so i would have at least read a little something something. Which i'm guessing you're leaving the good pat for chapter two.

    Update soon- We're perverse people, just wanting more.
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  • From ANON - Kat on February 20, 2005
    Why did you stop there?! Noooooooooooo! Please update soon. This is a very dark story...but I like it. You have got to bring out another chapter soon. Great start :)
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  • From ANON - Fairia13 not signed in - too much hassle ;) on February 20, 2005
    Wow, that's really dark.... I wonder what will happen next? I mean, besides the obvious. Will Inuyasha come for Kagome, or Kikyo? Will he blame Kagome, or be repulsed by her...? Hmm, the possibilities....I think you've given me an idea for a one-shot, but I'll run it past you to make sure its kosher before I post anything.... Untill then, have a wonderful day and I'll be looking for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - HANA \' on February 20, 2005
    wow so evil o.O update soon!!
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