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Reviews for Battlefield 1542

By : Dunkelgelb
  • From ANON - Howls_Hentai_Chickybabe on July 10, 2006
    What an amazing story! Original Sinner sent me the link here, telling me that I would like it. I was a bit dubious I must admit (only because I've only just recently started getting into Inuyasha and I wasn't sure about a DBZ crossover) but she assured me that this story kicked arse. I have to say, I'm still a little bit lost with the crossover, but you have written it so well, that irrelevant of the Inuyasha storyline and how it fits in, I'm hooked, line and sinker.

    Thankyou for such a terrific read XD
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  • From ANON - OriginalSinner on June 22, 2006
    O.k. here I am AGAIN... your avid, stalking fan *snorts* yup... what can I say? Only that... have you ever thought of posting this fic on the Anime 2 section of AFF. *doh!* I haven't even stopped to check to see that you hadn't.... this review might be a waste of time...* Anyways, despite the fact that I should've checked before I posted this review, I just posted a challenge there hoping to god that someone will answer it for me but irrelevant... while I was typing it out it got me thinking that I'm sure that you would quite possibly get a very favourable response from the Anime 2 readers for your well versed epic. Just an idea. Hate to see a good story go to waste without the reviews it deserves...

    ciao sweetpea

    The Sinner ~_^
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  • From ANON - OriginalSinner on June 20, 2006
    See?!!! I really do talk to much *time to bring out the gaff tape no?* kinky.... gods help me.. I'm a hentai what can I say? Anyway... before AFF so rudely interupted me and cut short my review... I was saying WHERE in the gods name did you come up with not only such horny smut but sensually satisfying as well…. You’re not gay are you??? I mean… I like playing with my own gender, yet I appreciate the het scene just as much as any other cock hungry female… bi-curious perhaps – I think that’s what they call it, so I could really appreciate it if you were, but either way… all I know is that your writing exudes a type of sensuality which is awkwardly bizarre, considering your gender… unless of course you are gay, or bi… or just an enigma to your kind. Hmmm…. Doesn’t really matter… *gushes* YOU ARE HOT. For a male to write such vivid, panty dampening material, I take a bow. You are one talented little vegemite my friend.

    All I can say is… Stop teasing me and update damn it!!!! *crawls back onto chair and wipes drool from chin…slides off wet patch on chair and races off to bathroom to have a COLD shower… even this freaking weather ain’t taking the edge off!*

    Thankyou! But know this… you are a tease… what is your address… can I keep you! *argh!* Look at what you’ve reduced me too…

    Nips and bites…

    The Sinner
    ~_^

    Sinner

    ps... i WILL continue to bug the shit out of you until you get this story up and posted! It will catch on... Trust me... Even if i have to be the only one making up the review numbers for now ^_~... I know of several hentai'd fiends who would love this story... Must email them your profile address... will that encourage you to continue? Thankyou for your teasers... they make me as frustrated as hell, but keep me a very happy hentai... looking forward to the day I come here and find a legit update sweetpea. Peace.

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  • From ANON - OriginalSinner on June 20, 2006
    Good gods… ‘sex induced rest’… don’t I know about that! And as for ‘aching flesh and a heart racing in excitement’… well that would have my current physical state summed up to a T at this point in time. All thanks to that blood boiling snippet of what I would have to say is one of the most ‘sour’ lemons I’ve tasted in a long while that you so graciously sent me! *slides off chair and smashes head against computer desk in hentai-induced mania*…

    k…. breathes deeply… fanning self… hyperventilation subsiding… stickiness between thighs now becoming quite annoying as it’s too damn cold to contemplate hopping into the shower… squirms in seat… not good… tingling increasing…uncrosses legs…Body heat a god-send… removing jumper… I should have known better than to read this tease right now. ARE YOU TRYING TO FREAKING KILL ME??? I’m gonna have to buy shares in a battery company after reading your, what was it that you called it? ‘pornographic literature’

    Gods… you are so lucky you live in America my friend, or I’m sure I’d have to stalk you… And that is so saying something cos I’m so not into guys right at this point in time >_
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  • From ANON - Original Sinner (NSI) on November 09, 2005
    *tap, tap, tap*.... that would be my foot sweetheart. K.... nuff with the suspense... can we at least have a sneak preview (you have my email don't you). PLEASE! You just can't be teasing like this! I know you being the genius that you are with all your crazy Newtonian physics and all is probably flat strap, but YOU HAVE TO FINISH THIS ONE sweetpea.... ~_^

    Peace.... will be back again soon
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  • From ANON - Original Sinner on October 15, 2005
    Wow! How rude! Where'd my review go? Yeah... I know, I talk to much... but on a finishing note since you didn't get to read all my review, I just wanted to commend you for having Izayoi and Inu no Taisho together in the Dust Bowl *sighs dreamily* how touching it was. I really can't wait to see what you have planned as the plot unfolds... the possibilities are endless, but right now I'm betting that Shyushu joins forces with Naraku to reek havoc on Earth somehow...am I right... warm? Cold? See! You got me coming up with my own inuendoes now... please finish this story... I shall return ~_^ *bookmarks*
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  • From ANON - Original Sinner on October 15, 2005
    *Gasps!* Oh no man - what are you doing? I understand you have a life and all (being the obvious genious I can see you are *aerospace engineering huh with all that yukky maths and physics type stuff... my brain hurts just thinking about it!*) and the preamble you wrote about restructuring the story is all well and good... but sweetheart... WHERE IS IT?!

    You've got to be proud of your effort. It's just the sweetest concoction... a dash of angst, a pinch of violence, a sprinkle of humour and wit and a dusting of tenderness... all with the guaranteed promise of hopefully a HUGE handful of panty dampening, make-your-nose-bleed-Roshii-style, Scream-type lemons! PLEASE!!!! Dont' be such a damn tease and give us a bit more already... or at least promise you'll finish it! I'll be a happy little hentai then just to know that I haven't wasted my time reading what I can see to be the beginnings of a truly kick-arse story; only to come back week after week to find no updates only to have to give up in despair.... Nuh-uh... please don't do that to me. You must finish this. I'd like to think that I have a gift of discernment and I can definitely see this fic unfurl to Wheezambu-ish proportions (if you just finish it!). From what I can see, you've kept the characters true to their personalities, even though this is a crossover (one of the best thought-out ones I've come across at that I must add.) Shippo kind of has this Dende-ish quality about him, so his role suits him well and Shyushu! What a bad, BAD doggy! He soooo needs to be taken to with a rolled up newspaper doesn't he? (However, being the queen of dysfunction that I am, I'm probably going to form an unhealthy infatuation with your sinister creation as I somehow find myself impartial to all the villains >_
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  • From ANON - Laini on May 22, 2005
    All I can say is that its different and im enjoying it so far.If u could email me whenever u update i would appreciate it a lot b/c this story is very interesting and i would like to keep up w/ whats going on.Well keep up the good writing and UPDATE ONEGAI
    :)
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  • From Yamima on May 03, 2005
    WOAH MAJOR DETAILS,

    UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - Piggi on April 24, 2005
    Wait...is this gonna be a Kagura/Sesshoumaru centered fic? at least i hope so...
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