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Reviews for Sango and the two demon prince's

By : NarakuBlack
  • From ANON - REadER on March 13, 2005
    Your story is really good and cute. But you should grammer and spell check your story. There were a lot of errors.
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  • From ANON - Risingsun on March 13, 2005
    don't listen to anyone who gives you flames! I am so glad that some one put up a sango story. Keeping making more there great.
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  • From ANON - Diane on March 13, 2005
    Well the plot sounds OK, but there are lots of spelling errors & such in just the 1st paragraph, princes means more than one so it would be princes [insert 2 names here] or prince name & prince name. Some more things I noticed is raped [forced sex] where I think you meant wraped & Kagome's not a monk unless she got a sex change, monks are male, mikos are female. I would definitely try to find a decent beta with at least a moderate grasp of English & grammar, etc. to go over this for you & fix all the goofs.
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  • From ANON - Queen123 on March 13, 2005
    Make more and fast i am in love with this type of stuff. I just love sango
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  • From ANON - Dude82 on March 13, 2005
    Sweet
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  • From ANON - christal-chan on March 13, 2005
    i loved it make more sango one shots
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  • From ANON - Anna on March 12, 2005
    The last lemon could have been better and you might want to try spell check, okay? That would be wise.
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  • From ANON - swissnights on March 12, 2005
    i love stories about Snago and Sesshomaru or Naraku keep up the good work and update soon
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