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Reviews for Secret Desires & Unbridled Fury

By : SilverCrescentMoon
  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on March 31, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Annonymus on March 27, 2005
    Ok No offense, you have a lot of potetntial, but I just was feeling the Fic. this is just some contsructive criticizm...ok? You need to work on your grammer (sorry majored in English) and your spelling. The way you had Sesshomaru speaking was kinda out of character (but then again it is a fan fic, so you do what you want), although the plot was pretty good and I am a total Kikyo hater, so I liked how you potrayed her...I hope that I did not offend you, I just know if you keep writing, you'll improve alot. Good Luck on your future fan fics!
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