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Reviews for Another Side to the Story

By : Wheezambu
  • From ANON - MeLaiya on January 09, 2007
    lol, I didnt read the first chapter but the second was definately my cup-o-tea. Loved it. Keep up the good work and update soon. Love to see Mirokus turn.
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  • From ANON - Sianeka on January 22, 2006
    OK, I really liked that second chapter. Good pacing, and characters still remained true to form. You do good lemon!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 20, 2006
    throw in a threesome
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  • From ANON - Hentaibitch on December 14, 2005
    sorry but I forgot 2 tell you about how I laughed about how Kagome is so 'innocent' ^_^. She sounds like me, except when I want something I get it right away, I dont beg for it I demand it. SO THERE!
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  • From ANON - Hentaibitch on December 14, 2005
    Well this fic was fun, even though you kinda made miroku the official whore of the group. I also thought Inuyasha was a bit OC because hes so thick-headed(sounds wrong doesn't it ^,^), but its okay making him a pervert was a good idea. Overall I enjoyed your story, so keep writing and i'll keep reading. Thats all I got to say since I hate making long reviews.
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on September 15, 2005
    That was so hot! Now all we need is a threesome!

    Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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  • From ANON - Chiruken on July 24, 2005
    Wow. That was a lot better than I anticipated. **laughs** I read the first chapter some time back and completely forgot (didn't expect a second chapter all). When I saw the second chapter was yaoi, I was a little skeptical (though admitedly curious). And I certainly wasn't disappointed. I thought it was very well written and the characters didn't seem to OOC as to be ridiculous. After all, no matter what, I think Miroku will always like women...but I also think he'd be curious and adventurous enough to try new things. Inuyasha, as rough and gruff as he usually is, does have a softer side so it makes sense that he'd be a conisderate lover. His (Inuyasha, that is) reasoning also made sense. His track record with women hasn't exactly been encouraging.

    All in all, I enjoyed this chapter (what I'm calling in my mind a "bonus" chapter **grinz**).

    Keep up the great work.

    ^_^x

    Chiruken
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  • From ANON - Kid ^_^ on July 09, 2005
    I just realized, while reading this story for maybe, the third or fourth time (second chapter at least....but I think I read the first one twice) that I might not have reviewed it yet. And, surprise, surprise, I hadn't! So, here it is! This story is very effective at getting me pleasantly aroused, I must say. ^_^ Yes, XRaven, yes! I love that review! Oh, and by the way, that poem (so cute!) had definetly helped me realise the Sango/Inuyasha chemistry. Woo boy! But, what I wanna know is, how come you haven't done any stories with them as a pairing, hmm? Well, at least, none that I have read (That'd be so hot!). I think something I thought a long time ago was on how casual this piece was, the second part, at least...That's mostly what I'm reviewing here....^_^;; It tickled me so! Laughter, sexual banter, horny jokes all around (and lots of dirty talk too!)! ^_^ Heh heh....Anyways....Yes! Yes, quirkyslayer! There should be a hot hentai drawing of this! Doesn't everyone think so?!?!?! I was reading it and thought that too! And yes, SHADOW and bayusandiw, the next one should be a three-some! I thought that while reading this, as well! UHHHHHHH, all these reviewers are reading my mind...! Or....telling the future, considering the reviewed before me....@_@ But I do want one with Miroku as seme......and I feel this should only be a three-piece story, not four...unless a certain taijiya happened to come into the gang's picture....~_^ Aaaaahhh, it would be a crazy ongoing, kinky, gender-don't-matter, unusual pairing story! Ha ha! ^_^;;; Sorry................................Anyway.....What I was thinking was maybe some Miroku/Inuyasha action with Miroku as seme and then Kagome might just run in on them and....duh duh duh! Three-some! Hee hee...Kagome might be coming back from her time and find them or they had snuck off somewhere, or........I don't know...-_-;; The ending to the first chap was so....so...."awwwww-ish," with the whole "beautiful demon slayer" part. I think I was kind of squeeling and saying "Sango! Sango!" or whatever when I first read the first chapter. Anyway, maybe just ponder my ideas.....maybe, just maybe....-_-;; Continue to write stories that make horny beasts like me satiasfied (Heh heh, just kidding, ^_^;; but seriously, your fics are hot!) !
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  • From ANON - bayusandiw on June 22, 2005
    the next would be Inu/Kag/Mir yaay... keep the juice flowin' uh-uy
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  • From ANON - kiiru on June 20, 2005
    Please tell me that you're going to write a third chapter to this.
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  • From ANON - SHADOW. on June 18, 2005
    THAT WAS ONE OF THE BEST YOAI FICS I'VE READ IN A LONG TIME, SO GOOD IN FACT THAT IT WAS ALL MOST SINFULLY EVIL....OOH I HOPE THAT YOU ADD A THIRD CHAPTER TO THIS FIC SOON, MABY SOMETHING ALONG THE LINES OF...OH I DON'T KNOW MABY KAGOME FINDING OUT, AND MABY THE THREESOM HAVE A MENAGE A TWA....OR SOMETHING ALONG THE LINES....YA DON'T HAVE TO USE THIS IDEA IF YA DON'T WANT TO THOUGH, IT'S TOTALY UP TA YOU THAT IS....ANYHOO KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK O.K.
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  • From ANON - Sakura Fubuki on June 15, 2005
    OMG...you should write more yaoi. I thought you were a gen only writer since I've never seen your stuff in yaoi category. It is so fucking hot and Inu is wonderfully in his character. So is Miroku. Yes, I command you to write another chapter with Miroku as seme. I need it!
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  • From ANON - blood-red on June 15, 2005
    read it again and it's just too good. love the inuyasha and miroku (big yaoi and smut fan) and all the other odd pairings you could have in there if you decide to continue every odd pairing (because i just love odd inuyasha pairings) except any of that rin/sess crap please continue!

    much encouragement,
    blood-red.
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  • From ANON - blood-red on June 15, 2005
    i love unusual parings like kagome and miroku or pairings like kagome and sesshomaru (
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  • From ANON - quirkyslayer on June 15, 2005
    OH God this is hot! The whole time I was thinking, "Oh God, are they going to do anal? Oh boy, yes there are..."
    It was great. Kagome and Inuyasha were a bit OOC but it's hard to pull off a quick lemon like this and be totally in character.
    It's not like it couldn't HAPPEN, right?
    I will say this, I'm glad you wrote Miroku the bitch for once. It seems that Inuyasha is always the bitch in doujinshi. This is a nice twist that Miroku was sorta put off initially by Inuyasha's advances.
    I love you! You wrote my favorite yaoi pairing. So hot! And your descriptions were very well done!
    This story just begs for a hot hentai drawing don't you think?
    XD
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