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Reviews for Dark Obsession

By : YoukaiObsessed
  • From OriginalSinner on June 22, 2006
    “Do you like the sound of my voice? Does it turn you on?” *clunk* That would be the sound of my jaw hitting the desk so my tongue can hang out like a panting bitch on heat. OMG!! Inuyasha is being cajoled into having phone sex with my hot, horny, horribly evil hanyou *gurgling on drool* and Naraku being so demanding about Inuyasha giving in! He’s such a bad, bad hanyou isn’t he? And Inuyasha… the phone sex virgin! Good gawds! And Naraku tapes it all! You’ve been a very Bad hanyou Naraku – go to my room and stay there until I tell you you can cum out! Wahooooo! Voyeur central! And Inuyasha is lying there, his huge hanyou cock waiting to be spanked at Naraku’s command! Can we have him lotion himself up? *hentai grin plastering pervertedly across face* Kinda makes you wish you were a fly on the wall don’t it?? DESPAIR (my new word for the week… yup… it’s caught on)!!! You’re a clit tease Tainted *hmph! Crosses arms and stamps feet* Still… a lil’ bit of filth flarn for me to chew on til your next updates… *clapping hands in hentai’d delight!* PHONE SEX!! Gotta love it ^_^

    Thankyou badgirl ^_~

    The Sinner


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  • From ANON - nani on June 21, 2006
    i really,really enjoy your work update soon
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  • From ANON - Shark on January 20, 2006
    You know, Tainted Dreams... I'm obsessed with your story. Believe it or not, I had dreamt with it yesterday night. In my dream, Inuyasha was driving his car while talking to Kouga on the phone, nothing more. Only a flash, but it was very intense. It was exactly the same image that I figured in my mind when I read your story by first time last Monday. My dream repeated it with a sense of motion. Very good. It was due to your skillful writing, I think.
    I want to make clear for you that it the first time I am so hooked with a fiction. I've read a lot of them but they become flat and insipid at some point, and I quit reading without finishing them. But your story is tasty, appealing from the first chapter. I was surprised when I realise I could not stop reading. I swallowed it in one afternoon. Very impressive. I can't stop thinking about it. I've read it three times by now. I've analized your writing building (it is almost a teacher habit), the way you bring the conflict, the rythm, when you accelerate the narrative or when you make a pause, the way you create second meanings, your paragraph construction, dialog fluidity, subtleness... God! You are good. You are a writer even when you say you aren't. That's why your story is different: you have literature.
    Keep working!! Go on!! Muses hold you.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 19, 2006
    This is really cool!

    Lol, Kouga could always blackmail Inuyasha into a relationship, but that probably wouldn't go over too well with the hanyou. ^_^
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  • From ANON - shark on January 18, 2006
    Congratulations for your story, because it is very well written. It has a strong inner structure, very well exposed, very intriguing and nervy, it has substance, suspense and sometimes a strange atmosphere (it is a very personal feeling, I know) that make me feel a bit nervous. Voluptuosity, darkness and danger very well mixed up. I admire the treatment you give to the characters, they are full of life, they are credible and complex, and I suppose it is so because of the nature of the decissions they make. I love specially the way you treat Naraku (masterly painted), and Inuyasha's ravishment for him.
    Please, go on!!!
    I cannot wait for the next chapter!!!!!!! Update soon!!!
    CONGRATULATIONS again!!
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  • From ANON - K-ster. on December 22, 2005
    God... Update... please.
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  • From Cindyip on December 21, 2005
    I can't wait to see what you do with Inuyasha and Naraku. It's okay that you move it around, just give a little warning(^_^)
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  • From ANON - kitty of course! on December 19, 2005
    ooo...spankings ^_^ (falls at Kouga's feet) oops, sorry reflex (snickers) ok seriously, how much does kitty love this fic?! ur doing an amzing job telling this story! i do suspect ur setting us up tho (shifty eyes) taking the time 2 have kouga explain how he'd never slap hiten..hmmm...wonder if nar would be as kind? can't wait till the next update. i so wanna see what u have up ur skirt (hehe)loads of love keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - person on December 19, 2005
    *drools* Mmm... tasty. XD Yay for spanking. And more yay for Hiten getting jacked of. >:D
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  • From ANON - Dante on December 17, 2005
    Wow, that's an excellent update. I think Hiten got exactly what he deserves and Kouga loves every second of it. haha.

    D_
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  • From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver (not logged in) on December 17, 2005
    That was toooooo fucking hot!!!!!!! God, Koga is so sexy and hot when he's being all dominant and S&Mish. Although, he's sexy no matter what he's doing. Hiten better not keep fucking with Inu. And when Koga finds out that Hiten erased Inu's message, I want to see a lot of spankings and punishment. I've been on this S&M kick lately, LOL. Anyway, looking forward to Inu and Naraku next. Nicely done and exceptionally written. You really bring the lemons to life. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Jade on December 17, 2005
    My email was down today so I wasn't planning on reading an fanfiction, but something told me to check aff, so I did. And I was pleasantly surprised to find that this was updated. Although slightly dissapointed by the lack of Inuyasha action in this chapter, I'm very pleased with how it turned out. I think it really benifited the plot. Anyway, I'm ranting. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Tsukiyomi on December 16, 2005
    I really like this story. At first I didn't want to read it cause it is in modern time, but I quickly got sucked in. It has been well worth it. I would like to see an Inu and Kouga intimate moment of sorts, or at least that damned Hiten getting what he deserves outside of the bedroom. I wonder if Kagome is going to find out about what Inuyasha has been doing in her absense.
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  • From ANON - ren on December 15, 2005
    wow, koga's idea of a little talk is something else...and poor inuyasha, on one hand i don't like to see him get hurt, on the other i like how he saw those lights dancing. mwahahaha, er. heh heh. poor inuyasha :)



    and just what would a naughty naraku message sound like?
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  • From Cindyip on December 11, 2005
    I am so glad that you updated!!!! I truly hope you mean it when you say there will be more smut in the next chapter, can't wait! I hope you update this qickly. Also I wish you gave some warning, before you moved this to the yaoi section, cause I was having a hard time finding this(^_^)
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