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Reviews for Kami's dark child

By : Sexgoddess2110
  • From lara5170 on June 15, 2014
    I've read this before and when I read it again today, all I could do was wish it were longer. I'd love to know what's going on with Kagome. What's with all this power she has, when did it start & why does she have it?
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  • From ANON - Kuma on December 30, 2005
    awesome can't wait for the next chapter lemon or not its a must to show the actual markin. anyways i can't wait to read more from you e-mail with the updates
    at Shalisa91@aol.com
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  • From ANON - fluffylover1978 on December 22, 2005
    THIS IS REALLY GOOD...PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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  • From ANON - angel101 on December 11, 2005
    i like it. i want to knowe what happens next plz with coco on top. : )
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  • From ANON - Tsuki on December 11, 2005
    hummm how to start this, you have a good idea for the story, but I highly suggest that you always recheck what you have written, because sometimes typing and grammatical mistakes will be found by you and thus you can correct making the reading even more enjoyable for your readers. Also when you decide to use foreign words always look it up in in a dictionary that way you will both add to the story some interesting elements and not make a fool of yourself by not spelling the word right. Like saluad is not written correctly --> salaud. This might have been a typing mistake or you didn't know how to write either way be careful. As for the story itself, it is very interesting but you are going to fast. I personally feel it that way, for example the fact that Sesshoumaru decided to make Kagome is mate was euhh to sudden ...
    keep up writing you are doing well enough just watch out for those little mistakes and if you ever need help with words like french, spanish, italian and portuguese you can always email me here: silver_moonlight87@hotmail.com
    I'll be happy to help you or you can also go to ALTAVISTA.COM this site has a very useful translator that you can use also

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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on December 07, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - kyokoma on November 30, 2005
    i really like your story!! i like how it has it's own unique flow to it!!i hope u continue it and update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on November 28, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - raven on November 27, 2005
    i really loved your story please update it soon.
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  • From ANON - Tai on November 27, 2005
    This is good...........poor Kagome she is depressed! Maybe Shippo will make her happy or rin
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  • From ANON - Lord-Anime on November 27, 2005
    I remember reading this a long time ago. It was pretty damn good, please don't delete it *sniffle*.


    Lord Anime
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on November 05, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Angel on November 04, 2005
    i love it you should really update it
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  • From ANON - InuYashasLoveLorn on October 02, 2005
    awww.... please dont delete this i've been waiting forever for you to add on a new chapter i really like this fic please keep posting.......... oh and keep up your good work! ^^
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  • From ANON - KawaiiKoneko89 on September 21, 2005
    I love this fic!!! You HAVE to update or else I will cry@!!!!:( lol lemons r good....:3
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