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By : OriginalSinner
  • From darkangelsephira on September 16, 2007
    I LOVE how you made Sessh seem so cruel when deep down he really cares about how Sango feels
    -Squee-
    I cannot WAIT until your next chapter! Keep up the awesome work!
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  • From wudelfin on August 05, 2007
    wow this is very good. love the dept you put into this
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  • From NovalisBelle on July 03, 2007
    WOW THIS IS REALLY GOOD, PLEASE UPDATE!!!
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  • From dementedsoul on April 02, 2007
    Pure evilness.

    This is a VERY good story.

    Please continue.
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  • From menzu2 on January 16, 2007
    Hi,
    I hope you will finish this story. it is soooo good...cant wait for next pieces of their meeting.
    cheers, AM
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  • From ANON - Iyasu on October 03, 2006
    This is the first Sango/Sesshoumaru that I've ever read, and let me tell you, I have absolutely fell in love with the pairing! It seems to work so perfectly the way you put it! Very nice writing. I can't wait to see your later work.
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  • From ANON - translucenttears on July 14, 2006
    wow, you know i've read both stories you've written all before you werent able to get to a computer for a very long time, so i was so surprised when you updated, i love both stories, your a really talented writer and i hope that you update this and lessons soon! i do know up to chapter 12 in this story, but let me tell you, being that its been soo long since i've read it, i reread the chapters that you've updated and there really good! hope to read more soon for both stories! Keep up the great work!!
    ~Translucenttears~
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  • From ANON - Artemesis on July 14, 2006
    Original Sinner, I must say that I am finding this story to be quite enjoyable. Firstly, I have to tell you that I like the fact that the chapters are quite lengthy. I truly love the way you have gone into detail and ina few places, especially in chapters 3 and 4, could almost feel what Sesshoumaru and Sanog where feeling. Secondly, I like how you've kept the characters pretty much to their original portrayals. Sesshoumaru is often written quite out of character. I like how you have kept him in character. A Sesshoumau without stoicism or arrogance would not be Sesshoumaru at all. I believe that these attributes are what makes his character so delectable. And thirdly, I like your dry sense of humour. Especially in chapter 2 with the conversation between Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha. The 'ugly bastard' and 'deformed idiot' lines were quite comical. I could almost see a vein pop out the side of Sesshoumaru's head at being called an 'ugly bastard' lol. Now, the hunt.... Well, that is what dreams are made of. I shall have happy dreams tonight of being hunted by an unearthly Adonis and being tackled to the ground and ravished. Lucky Sango! Sadly I must retire. This story will be added to my favorites and I will return again to see what transpires... Great writing.
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  • From ANON - Artemesis on July 14, 2006
    Another good story Original Sinner. And here I was after reading through some of the reviews that you have left on other authors stories, that you weren't so fond of Kagome? Oh well, it seems you have made good use of her character in this story. So, Sango and Kagome are groping eachother in the hot spring and Sesshoumaru is spying on them like a pervert, hidden in the trees. Very mischevious hahaha. Now who has walked in on them? I'm thinking it's Inuyasha, but then again, it could be Miroku. The plot is thickening quite well XD


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  • From ANON - inconvenientiches on July 14, 2006
    This story hits every desire we women dare not admit. I'm not sure anyone could beta your work, it would be like trying to copy the gods.
    I've already started some digi art on this, though I'll never admit the story that made me do it. ^_~
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  • From RuriRuri on July 13, 2006
    oh yah i forgot.. UPDATe!! evvil i swear evvil! hahah good job tho ur REALLY good!
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  • From RuriRuri on July 13, 2006
    WAHH your fic is GREAT!! hahaha i LOVVE IT!! haha because of this fic i will definitly have a little playful click with sess and sango! hahah OH YAH! and yenno yer fic inspired me! and so i know how my plot will twist and uhm.. make a good story! YES hahaha i love it! THANX for your wonderful review! haha you and chigirl! its as if.. im writing just for you! *maybe* hahah well actually im partly writing because of your inspiration! haha i cant say it enough! hahha but anywayz! thanx!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 11, 2006
    Extremely interesting storyline and comedic as well...what more could anyone ask? *****
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  • From Superbitch on July 10, 2006
    Hey there Lannabelle :) Big smiles from me to you. I bet that I would be the last person you would be expecting a review from. I read all the bits'n'pieces in your little note book and realized you were a woman of many talents. I didn't however realize that this little site that you frequented quite often while you were staying with me contained such a delightful array of horny stories, of which I'm even more shocked to find that you attributed to. And then to find that you had quite a following blew me away completely. Well, I guess not so completely. Nothing that you do really surprises me. You know that what you do you do well, therefore I guess that should go with every facet of your life, not just the bits that I know about you. You introduced me to Inuyasha, and anime in general, and now, I have to give you thanks for introducing me to this devine site. What an alter ego we seem to have darling. Evil girl... Just makes me like what I see even more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 10, 2006
    I am reading this waiting for your Lessons in Lust update. This is so col. Iwish I had have read it sooner. Sango and Kagome getting off on each other. Wow. This is good. I should have known it would have been. At least I have more to read while I wait for the new update for lesson in Lust.
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