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Reviews for A Captain's Prize

By : chanda
  • From ANON - sexychick2000 on November 16, 2005
    your text is fine, its better than some other stuff i've red before. I love your story its original and fun to read. Just keep the chapters comming.
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  • From ANON - emmet849 on November 16, 2005
    Wow! What a wonderful chapter. Lemony goodness indeed! I absolutely loved the interaction between Koga and Inuyasha. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Lea on November 06, 2005
    i EFFIN' LUB this FIC!!!!!!!!!! MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Torne on November 01, 2005
    I finally catch up...AND YOU LEAVE ME WITH A CLIFFY!??? Mistess Chanda you are so cruel Please continue as soon as possible! Six months without Inu yasha...how will Kagome surviveo.o .....that is if they can overcome the british first.....update onegai!

    ~Love Torne
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  • From Torne on October 22, 2005
    Hey! Love the story, I'm still not caught up with your current chapter yet (my brain has been frazzeld lately) I LOVE the way you have intergrated almost all of the Anime's charectors into your story, and added others so neatly that its as if they were meant to be there all along. ~keeps a distance between self and Chanda~ wouldn't want to give you my writers block...tis a horrible thing for one to have...Keep up the good work, hopefully I'll catch up tp your current chapter soon!

    ~Love Torne
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  • From ANON - emmet849 on October 22, 2005
    Well you've got me on the edge of my seat. I'm really loving this story. I hope your muse returns soon. I have finished what you've written so far. Excellent work. I can't wait to see if Inuyasha's plan works. I loved the flirtatious dual between I and K. Keep up the good work and update when you can.
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  • From chanda on October 20, 2005
    Anon, thank you for your positive feedback, it was very helpful. I will definetly go back and correct, the mistakes I have made and therefore I do apologize.

    Thank you, everyone who has reviewed. I will try too update soon.

    Chanda
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 20, 2005
    ok. first off, i want to tell you that i love your story. it is very cute.
    but there is one thing that i found wrong with the writing- some gramar
    the bigest and actually only problem i have with the grammar is the to-two-too and their-they're-there

    meanings of the words
    to - directional i am going to the boat with you. as youg give presents to as in to and from to is the direction (person) the gift is for
    two - the number 2
    too - also, i too am going - aka I also am going

    the two of us are going to the boat too.
    the 2 of us are going to the boat also

    their - possesive. it belongs to them. it's their book. it's their ship
    they're - contraction for they are. they are gong to to see a movie - they're going to see a movie
    there - place/location i'm going there. there is someing eating my arm off.

    they're there in their house

    please don't take this personally. i do love your story. it just irritates me when i see words missused.
    i have also noticed in several places where you switched where and we're
    where-
    At or in what place: Where is the telephone?
    In what situation or position: Where would we be without your help?
    From what place or source: Where did you get this idea?
    To what place; toward what end: Where is this argument leading?

    we're

    Contraction of we are.

    were

    Second person singular and plural and first and third person plural past indicative of be.
    Past subjunctive of be. See Usage Note at if. See Usage Note at wish.



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  • From ANON - emmet849 on October 20, 2005
    Wonderful chapters. I am now in the middle of chapter 10 and I am still really enjoying the story. I love how you portray Kagome as a very strong woman. I also like the callous affection between Inuyasha and Kagome. Very well done. Until next time,
    emmet849
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  • From ANON - emmet849 on October 19, 2005
    Sorry, forgot a couple of things I wanted to say. I love the setting. Inuyasha as a pirate, wonderful stuff. I've read a couple of other stories with this idea, but I must say yours is the best. Delicious!
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  • From ANON - emmet849 on October 19, 2005
    Miss Chanda,
    I started to read your story over again, since I haven't read it for a while. I've made it through chapter 1 so far, but I'll review again when I get farther along. Your writing is inspiring and poetic. I love it! I've actually started to print it out so I can read it whenever I want over and over again. I love how you describe things from the character's clothes to their thoughts and emotions. Very well done. I don't know if you're done with the story or not since I haven't looked ahead, but I know I'm in for an interesting and wonderful journey. Thank you for writing. You are incredibly talented. Hats off to you. Until next time, take care!
    emmet849
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  • From ANON - putrikagome on October 14, 2005
    Hi sweety!! Welcome back!...I love your story as always...Nice work!! :P
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  • From ANON - Byako (not signed in) on October 02, 2005
    I like this story!!! I like it alot. The characters are very well defined and I like how you have Shippou more as a teenager/young adult. It's very cute. I hope you keep writing!

    Byako
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  • From ANON - putrikagome on September 13, 2005
    I've just read up to Chapter 12...now..You are so good! All well written....and I like it so far...I will read the rest...and give you my review again...Good job! Love you..^_^ as always.
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  • From ANON - Bibsta on September 10, 2005
    Nooooooo! Naraku got his hands on Kagome and Inu is dead! *weeps* update soon! 100000000000000000000000000/10
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