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Reviews for My Cinderella

By : JazmineD
  • From Starryice on June 22, 2019

    Great so far; please update & finish soon!!


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  • From ANON - dsfsdfd on February 03, 2016
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  • From Ruuka on September 06, 2008
    Well, i have to say this even though it might hurt
    your feelings. The grammar and spelling in your story
    really was not that good. There were spelling mistakes
    just about everywhere and repeated words. Some words
    were even used out of context. And is this how you precieve
    the InuYasha characters? Because they are way to OOC.
    Especially Sesshomaru, He accepted Rin way too quickly. And
    your chapters and lemon seem very rushed/ Also your chapters
    are quite short.

    I think you should try explaining your story more and giving
    more detail as to what is heppening. Also i think you should
    look into getting a beta reader, i think it will help your
    story alot. Although your story is quite good and i enjoyed it,
    it needs alot of fixing and revising. Althoguh throught the
    chapters you improved your grammar and speeling alot, so that's
    really good. But i still advise a beta reader, although i myself
    do not have one. And i think in this story you should put it as
    an Alternate Universe, since as they are not in the fuedal era
    in your story. But other than that your story is good and i
    think you should continue. Update Soon, i would love to see what
    happens.

    ^_^ Ruka
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  • From orvida on December 17, 2007
    wow all of the characters are ooc' but i like it i can't wait for your next post to go up hopefully it won't take to long for you to post?
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  • From jenn2118 on June 10, 2007
    please please finish this story it is amazing i cant wait to see how it ends!
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  • From HoshiGiniro on January 23, 2007
    Umm on chapter 14 ...i just thought you should know a woman cant test for pregnacy till shes been pregnat two to four weeks but its your story so ill let it slide

    ~Ja HoshiGiniro
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  • From ANON - Alli on November 16, 2006
    very good please hurry and add more chaps....there fantastic,...
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  • From ANON - hello on July 31, 2006
    awesome!
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  • From ANON - Crimson_Rose18 on July 16, 2006
    i love this story! it's really good and now i just want to know what will happen next!!!
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  • From ANON - cortney ohare on June 21, 2006
    I love this story ALOT!!! Once in a while after i watch an inuyasha show makes me want to read this story all over again and again when ever i see sesshomaru, rin and jaken although i don't care about the little,green toad! You know i think if rin was older on the inuyasha show and sesshomaru fell in love with her they would make a REALLY CUTE COUPLE!!! So that's why i love reading "my cinderella"story. I hope you make a chapter 17 soon, cause i'm REALLY into this alot and i want to know what happens next. Let me if you get this review and maybe i'll give another review of what i think about the new chapters. BYE, BYE.
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  • From ANON - inkheart6 on May 06, 2006
    plz update soon ^_^
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  • From ANON - inkheart6 on May 04, 2006
    Great story^_^ BUT LEAVE ME HANGING. WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT?!?!?!?!?! UPDATE SOON.
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  • From ANON - kagome2004 on April 30, 2006
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Jasy on February 01, 2006
    I love it but i want to knowwhat happens please!!!!
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  • From on January 31, 2006
    RIN!!! Sesshoumaru wake up damn it!!! TT She is being kidnapped... Make that Sesshoumaru wakes up with the intention to go in her rom and see that she is gone and just finds her again in her anciant house... please don't make her loose the baby... :(
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