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Reviews for Rise Of The Demons

By : GenesisEve
  • From GenesisEve on June 03, 2008
    DarknessDawns,

    Thanks for the review, it's nice to hear from someone. I'm just sorry i haven't been nailing this thing out like i previously would have. Though to answer you in part, i didn't put names in the sex scene for a reason. I'm just not sure how much i'll use it in the end when the characters come to life. Although that is something that doesn't take place for quiet sometime. Honestly, there are scenes to come where characters won't be named specifically. But it's all for a reason. Seeing as this is the first review in a long time i'll try and get a new chapter up soon.

    Thanks.
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  • From Darknessdawns on May 31, 2008
    I am really enjoying this story so far. But I dont understand how Inuyasha could forget about Kagome and his friends like that at the beginning. Its not like him even if his dad is back from the dead. Maybe it will all make more sence later. Also I have one suggestion for you. At the beginning of the lemon scene it took me a few moments before I could figure out who you were mentioning. Maybe you could use names more than the he said, she said kind of thing. It only works well if we already know who you meen and if there is only one he or she in the conversation or whatever or if they had just said something and was adding more. Sorry if it sounds like I am criticizing. I'm not. I really enjoyed you work and can't wait until you write more.
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  • From ANON - gitamerah on November 11, 2007
    Okay, I'm a little confused. Maybe I'm not reading well enough. Who is the couple having sex on that last chapter?
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  • From Iyasu on September 15, 2006
    I like it! Will Inuyasha ditch Kagome and the others to be part of the Youkai society? Looking forward to the upcoming chapters.
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  • From ANON - InuYasha\'s Girl on June 21, 2005
    I cannot express how happy I am to see that you and this fic is back, can't wait for more,
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