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Reviews for Trust and Truth

By : Kaguya
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 04, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - karla on November 07, 2005
    grrrr. i hate stupid cliffhangers. keep up the story your doing really well. how bad was inu and kags fight? did she mention kikyo? (i hate that dead bitch)
    make inu happy!! and make me happy by adding a lemon soon!!! keep updating, i love it!
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  • From ANON - aaaaa on August 10, 2005
    hmmm i sugest if you want to leave a cliffy like you could maybe start the subject of what they fought about because as i am courious (spelling sorry lol) im not as much as i could be if you started the fight a little bit would make more dramatic anyway good start ill be waiting for the next chapter bye ! :)
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  • From ANON - sublimetrickster on June 27, 2005
    I am left wondering what is going on here. A liitle more info in the first chapter would be nice. Why is Kagome gone? Why does Shippo think she won't come back? This could be interesting, but at the moment I'm not sure. I guess I'll have to wait and see.

    There were a few things that rang false for me. While Sango has a problem with Miroku touching her ass in public, she would likely not yell and beat him for calling her his love. She is a shy girl and would most likely blush at an endearment from the the man she loves. Also, I'm not sure why you are referring to her as the "taijiyoukai". She is usually refered to as a taijiya (spelling may be wrong as I don't use that word). THis may be a word I'm just not familiar with, but at the moment it looks like confusion.

    I look forward to seeing more in this story, keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - fallenangel7583 on June 27, 2005
    interesting start to the story. shippo is acting like a brat but i sense more behind his pleas. maybe...who knows. soooo...inu has to kill kikyo? interesting stuff. well done...maybe a littel more description could be used. the one phrase you used that i'm not fimiliar with that was repeated, though, was tajiyoukai. the tai-youkai (or diayoukai) is sesshoumaru, lord of a reigon, and a tajia, i think that's how its spelt, is a demon slayer. but to combind 'demon' and 'externimator' together...a littel different. hmmm.... anywho's, good story, keep it up!!!
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  • From ANON - EvilKittenn (not signed im) on June 27, 2005
    Uh huh, a nice start. Hopefully, things will be ok between our two favorite heros. If it's not, I might have to beat the authoress senseless. *looks around* Ok maybe I'm not that evil... or am I??
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  • From on June 27, 2005
    i like it your doing well for your first fic, better then me when i first started i hope you update soon.
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