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By : Afterthought
  • From ANON - Anon on December 03, 2006
    me like! more please.
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  • From ANON - Eisha on October 16, 2006
    Oh my god!! I LOVE YOUR FIC!!!!!
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  • From Iyasu on September 30, 2006
    It's not bad, but with a little work, it could be a whole lot better. See, you left out a few important details, like when Kikyou first kissed Kagome, you never mentioned that she felt disdain in the first place, but later you did. You should have added more there, like her thoughts or something. Also, for the end, I would have recommended a better conclusion; a stronger note of finality. I get the feeling that you stopped right before the actual end. Keep writing, though! I'm sure with more practice, you'll be great!
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  • From sengoku on February 06, 2006
    it dosent mader if you are strait as long as you write good storys and this one is good keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - inuyasha on December 13, 2005
    you really need to right the rest because it was reallt good.

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  • From ANON - Sara on November 28, 2005
    I was a awsome read. a tad little short but still good
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  • From ANON - Girleh on July 17, 2005
    Not bad for or first time.
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  • From ANON - thegreatcornholio on July 07, 2005
    Nice story! Like the pairing, can't find any others like it!
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  • From ANON - Sergi on July 02, 2005
    Write more like this this is a good fic.
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  • From dannygirl720 on June 29, 2005
    hey ... you know who i am... not bad.. dont know what you were so worried about it turned out fine...
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  • From ANON - Crumbobulus on June 29, 2005
    Not bad actually........
    It could use more detail, but pretty good................. Definatly better than my first.... ; )
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