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By : Xakana
  • From VenusOfHeaven on October 28, 2005
    Uh, Uh, I think you are worse than me, which is a lot to say, you know. So... Sesshomaru is a drug to Miroku? I would have never thought of Miroku as a masochistic one (well, a bit, if you consider all those slaps) but you made it believable, and perfect, and just... write more. Please?

    VenusOfHeaven

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  • From ANON - sesshomarulover132 on August 15, 2005
    That was Sooo good!^.^
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  • From bd84 on August 12, 2005
    ya know, for a minute i wasnt gonna read this because Miroku just isnt very high on my list in the first place and then i thought that maybe you had stuck him with Naraku - who is even further down on my list - but since ive been fooled before i scrolled down and was happily suprised that you'd stuck sesshy in the story :D yay! honestly, i dont think i've read many fics that are mir/sess you'd think i would have but i apparently have not found them.
    anyway! i really liked it. again you've kept the character in character and its well written and everything!
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on July 23, 2005
    Giving us a peek inside the character's mind is like giving us a glass of sweet wine. It makes the lemons so much hotter.

    Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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  • From ANON - Mira on July 22, 2005
    Someday... but not today. *sigh* I love this story. I like that it is a one-shot. Other reviewers want you to continue, but I'm not sure I could imagine the next part... You write extremely well. I also have many many things that I will do 'someday' yet that someday always turns out to be 'not today' so I love that last line. We all have our guilty pleasures, now don't we? Keep writing, you are a fantastic writer. I think I will go read some of your other stories now. *chu*
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  • From ANON - alisha on July 09, 2005
    Yep I'm way too lazy to write a useful reveiw..but I'll say that I rather enjoyed this fiction, it was deep. Yep enjoyed it...ya

    ~alisha
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  • From ANON - SHADOW. on July 04, 2005
    HMMMM, THAT WAS A GRATE LITTLE FIC....THOUGH THE LEMON COULD OF BEEN LONGER, OTHER THAN THAT IT WAS GRATE...KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK, AND KEEP WRITING O.K.
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  • From ANON - bob on July 04, 2005
    I luv your writing style, I also love Miroku and Sesshomaru fics. That fic was awesome.... was it a one shot? If so I am very disappointed.
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  • From ANON - lilly on July 03, 2005
    I am impressed. I truly enjoyed this story. You have a gift for discriptive phrases, and your writing flows smoothly. Thank you for sharing this one. I also enjoyed how it was presented from only Miroku's point of view, and you truly gave us a glimpse of his thoughts and emotions. (An interesting side note: Why not try to write the same oneshot on the flip side, from Sesshomaru's perspective? I'd be interested to see how you show his thoughts and emotions.) Anyway, this story was extremely well written and I truly enjoyed it. Please continue to share your wonderful stories.
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on July 03, 2005
    I thought I reviewed this already. Maybe not, or maybe on MM?? No idea my brain is hentaified at the moment. Anyways, great story, loved the way you wrote this. Good job!!
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  • From Kugatsu on July 02, 2005
    Oh I love this. Some how dark deep very personal into the mind of Miroku. Well written.
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