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Reviews for A Sacred Treasure and a Hanyou

By : cukid9
  • From LIlmamma on December 23, 2017

    I love your story, as for the name it's good, you could probably also call it something like 'More than just a stripper' since she is in fact more than just a stripper


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  • From MissMarilyn69 on April 08, 2010
    So after reading this I have to express my disappointment but I feel that I have to say this first. I'm not a writer though I have tried, so I'm not going to preach and nag, because it is hard to write and I also know how much emotion can sometimes get put into it. I was in love with the style of the story from the first chapter and just got more and more into it as I kept reading. I could see where this started out just being a flirty lemon piece, but when it took a turn toward the dark after the middle I was overjoyed. I could have happily kept reading where the muses were leading you, but you shied away at the end, and that is my disappointment. I know it doesn't matter what I think really and honestly I can understand that you seem to have moved away from fan fiction and that I think is wonderful, because just reading the fan fiction I could tell that you had serious writer in your heart. So I'll not ask for you to come back to Inuyasha but I am sad that weren't able to follow though on your instinct in this story.
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  • From Alpine02 on December 04, 2008
    Ok.. Now I am hooked.. Can not wait to see where this goes...
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  • From hanyoufan on July 29, 2008
    I loved this story! You have a great writing style. Can't wait to see what else you come up with!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on March 02, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - inuslilmiko on January 17, 2008
    you really have a way of bringing emotion out in your readers. I found myself tearing up at a couple moments... quite a thing for me (I never really get that involved with a story) but some how your writing managed! Very good and very moving. My only complaint, like yours I guess, is the ending. It wasn't bad... but considering the greatness of the entire story, it was kinda a let down of sorts. The ending would have been good for most of the stories I read, but yours needs something... more I guess, can't describe it. Anyway, wonderful story, great characters, true emotion, and very compelling... as always! Can't wait for more! ~inuslilmiko~
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  • From ANON - Windwarrior29 on November 27, 2006
    That is a perfect ending. It really doesn't leave me with questions that I really want answered, it leaves me with an ending that I can imagine happily. It balances itself on the point of an upturned beat and a splendid, graceful flow into a lovely ending that does just what it should. Your story took on a mind of its own and you let it, therefore the story could conclude itself the way it needed, perfectly. Thank you for letting me correct you, it was a wonderful story with a wonderful ending that fit it beautfully. The entire thing reminded me of a ballet, really. A beginning, inviting, headstrong and invigorating. The middle, where the piece speeds up and you see characters take shape and talent being displayed, then the end, where the graceful have stayed, survived the crescendo, and now get their chance to leave the rest of their dance to the audience. Perfect.
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  • From ANON - Portia on January 31, 2006
    I LOVE YOUR STORY! Your an A*FING*MAZING writer. Please update again soon!...and there will be more updates right..i mean your not just going to leave it there and torture me like that are you? PLEASE I NEED YOU!!!!!!!*breaks down into hysteria* lol ok i'll leave you be now!
    much love,
    Portia
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  • From xxPuppyEarsxx on January 15, 2006
    so i just wanna say.. ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!
    though you're right. you did leave the reader hanging with some stuff.
    like naraku, the last piece of the jewel..
    so if you could please tell me if you're written a sequel already
    that would be mighty appreciated haha
    awesome job on the fic!
    ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kaori on January 05, 2006
    Wow, I love this fic. I also like how you have Kagome being more aggressive. Its quite amusing, lol. But Inuyasha should be more dominant in the bed, ahah, its just hes that way, you know? lol. But hey, i give no cruel thoughts to Kagome being dominant, cuz I bet its quite fun doing whatever you please to Inuyasha. Lol. Great job, keep up the good work and I can't wait till the next update.
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  • From ANON - Mel on January 04, 2006
    Great story I had today and yesterday off and was in the mood to read something enjoyable this was a really nice little tale I absolutely loved it. The description of the dances were fantastic I could really see it all in my head it was pure poetry. Lovely just lovely! I have read other storys that have dancing in them but I don't think any of them described it half as well as you did. the tango at the end was just sinful! Well done :)
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  • From ANON - Mel on January 04, 2006
    Heh I have read alot of inuyasha fic and alot of it was NC-17 rated but I just finished reading that first chapter and I have to say that was the most brilliant description of a lapdance I have ever read LOL! Anyway it's been a while since a fic has caught my attention that quickly after reading the first chapter so I expect this to be interesting.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 08, 2005
    u r rite i say"She left so many unanswered questions!! What about Naraku?! And the piece of the Jewel that's missing?! Not to mention, it took her this long to update...and now she's telling us it's the end.?! "
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 14, 2005
    love it,
    I WANT MORE,
    PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
    A SEQUEELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
    IIIII lololololveveveveveve(love) itititititit
    sssssssssssssssoooooooooooooooooooosssssssssssssssssssssssooooooooooooooooooooooo
    MUCHMUCHMUCHMUCH
    !*!*!*!*!*!*!*!*!*!*!
    it's so good.
    ---cool chic
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  • From on November 03, 2005
    hey. i've just finished your whole story...and...wow....

    absolutely beautiful!! i loved every minute of it!! i really do hope you write a sequel. because i will most certainly read it! wonderful job!
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