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By : BlackberryPatch
  • From MaDDeRHaTTeR on November 28, 2017

    NOOOOOOO WTF!!!??? Oh GODS 


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  • From MaDDeRHaTTeR on November 28, 2017

    Well, this is beautifully confusing! Lol! I had to go back to the first part and confirm something I previously assumed with the given clues...

    "...She had been impressed by Kaede's rosary and had not attempted to remove the spell, instead layering hers on top of it. Her spell... far more restrictive than the rosary spell. Far more... It didn't just subdue him when the chosen word was uttered, it bound his will to hers..."

    See... I assumed the SHE was Kagome turned awful evil, power tripping in sickness! Imagine my surprise when she was just there in the next segment, napping under a tree like normal with Shippo! Haaha! So... I guess I wanted to know if the mysterious "she" would ever be revealed as far as identity goes? Excellent plot b.t.w.! I am truly enjoying this!!


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  • From SammyJams on October 09, 2016

    Great story!


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  • From Vyper on September 07, 2012
    I love these stories you have written. Thank you.
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  • From Iarejedi on July 20, 2008
    I liked this story alot. The development between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru was perfect. It wasn't to fast. And it flowed naturally. The OC characters were very well done. It was nice to see a writer who could add them into their story and not ruin the rest. :D So great job. Very hot yaoiness. :D I'm gonna move on to your other stuff now. :D
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on June 22, 2008
    This was wonderful, I love how you wrote out the confusion that both brothers felt and how they accepted thier own feelings
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  • From Juniperbreezie on May 04, 2008
    Awesome story. Loved it!!!
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  • From ANON - asialisek on March 03, 2008
    this has got to be one of my fav. sess x inu fics out there (as of 5min. ago). not only 'cuz it's well written (that's an additional plus for the enjoyment factor), but also because you preserved an Inuyasha that doesn't turn into a simpering, blubbering, emotional basket case in the face of conflict. Both of them realize (finally) the potential in the other and start to grow with it. Inu isn't all bluster and no brains, and Sess isn't so aloof a cold (plus emotionally ignorant) that he ends up causing more damage than necessary.

    Ya.. basically, the story is great. Your characterization was fantastic. And! Yer an awesome writer.

    thanks for sharin' this with us here on the web.
    Just awesome.

    xox

    Asialisek
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  • From ANON - asialisek on March 02, 2008
    sequel! joy! just left a review for Inglorious ... aaaand.. lol didn't realize my wish would come true.
    delicious.

    Read on!!
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  • From Huntedrose on October 29, 2007
    Arg! I love this, it's the best S/I I've read, even though I'm pretty new to yaoi. So, please, more! (puppy dog eyes)
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  • From cloudydayz on September 22, 2007
    I've read this story and inglorious so many times I think I have memorized them! And lo and behold my surprise when I see you have written more! What a fantastic surprise for a lazy Saturday afternoon. Thank you so much for continuing to write on this story. I simply love it! Well, I'm off to read some more!!!!
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  • From Onyxlight on September 08, 2007
    "...evil bitch woman notwithstanding."-- that line was beyond perfect!!


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  • From lilkkjo082004 on July 28, 2007
    please update soon
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  • From midnightsweet on June 25, 2007
    great story from start to finish.
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  • From Vague on May 25, 2007
    Hello Author,
    I am a huge fan of yaoi and have started a site archiving all the good yaoi fiction. I am glad to say that your story has made it into the archive. Congratulations on telling a truly moving tale.

    About the site:
    Yaoi-ai is nothing more than a site which links directly to good stories. I do not claim your story as my own but rather I encourage others to read and review it as it deserves that recognition.

    Your story is linked at http://yaoi-ai.com/index.php?showtopic=96. If you would like it to be removed from the site or are concerned about anything then please send me an email. I will be glad to answer or remove it. Thank you.

    Vague
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