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Reviews for Tama no Kakera

By : AngeliqueDaemon
  • From Starryice on June 20, 2019

    Please, please, PLEEEEAASSEEE continue & finish this story; it’s AWESOME!!!


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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on October 26, 2005
    I like how you have Rin's mind set is going.....How she really doesn't understand all what is going on......I hope she will at least tell Keade(sp?) what is going on with her and the dreams she is having ....She must trust someone......update soon.....
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  • From drake220 on August 16, 2005
    a lot of kagura/kanna elements here. I'm not so sure whether its intentional or not but as it's a gray area, you should either point out more strongly the differences or purposeful similarities. The Rin/Sess angle was well done.
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  • From ANON - Devon Masterson on August 14, 2005
    I am really getting into this. So the Shikon no Tama is in Rin's chest? Very interesting, thanks:)
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  • From Altari on August 14, 2005
    Very very nice! I'll be waiting for the next update. ;)
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  • From ANON - animepunk93 on August 13, 2005
    i loved it but didn't midoriko's soul get sucked into the shikon no tama making
    it imposible for her to get reincarneted
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  • From drake220 on August 11, 2005
    i like this alot! one thing though- when rin masturbates, it was a bit jarring going from reality to imagination. I would make maybe the daydream italized. The ~~ things are just distracting and ruin the flow. lAlso, the story starting off with sess crying? reeaallly off putting. Maybe say he felt like it but didn't. People need to be led into your version of sess and expecting the readers to immediately understand your version is just no realisitc. Beyond that, the story is shaping up well! update soon!
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on July 27, 2005
    Interesting ....interesting...let's see where you go with it......
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  • From HimeAndi on July 27, 2005
    At last, an adult Rin I can believe in... not a cutsie bratling or a naive seductress, but a young woman who has her own mind and her own will! Excelent work!
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  • From ANON - Cassie on July 27, 2005
    Nice story very good so far... keep up the good work. Can't wait to read chapter 2.
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  • From ANON - Luna on July 27, 2005
    very nice! i love how its starting off... i hope you keep writing soon!
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