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Reviews for Kagome’s Torment

By : DarkroseLelix
  • From ANON - roora takanashi on August 17, 2006
    I really enjoy this story i can not wait for the next chapter. arigatou
    dewa mata

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  • From shadowcat on January 26, 2006
    please update soon! that was very good. the spelling n grammar in chap 1 were poor but it got so much better now. more morem more!!!
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  • From ANON - MARI on December 16, 2005
    I HAVE A FEELING THAT I CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - animelover on November 08, 2005
    I love your story, please update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Konpaku on October 30, 2005
    I do like the story so far, and I hope you update soon ^^.
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  • From ANON - kag_naraku on October 20, 2005
    ^^ whooo that was sooo cool! update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 13, 2005
    hmmm...are you gonna update anytime soon?
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  • From ANON - luckyducky7too on October 03, 2005
    This story looks very interesting. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Arishia on September 26, 2005
    OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! U BETTER UPDATE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS I BEG OF U !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLS PLS PLS PLS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY TO DEATH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 26, 2005
    UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN
    EMAIL ME WHEN YOU UPDATE
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  • From ANON - Sam on September 26, 2005
    Yes, please do fix the grammer, and this story, though not half as bad as some I've read, does need some improvement. However, I did enjoy what I was seeing, please do continue, now won't you? Some things that'd make this story better include: Stop repeating the begginings of your paragraphs, only one person should be thinking, or talking in any paragraph, and, most important, you must show, in more detail, what the characters are seeing, and feeling.
    Still, I did like this story, and I do hope you continue soon. Ja Ne.
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  • From ANON - Sakura on September 23, 2005
    it was good...hurry up annd update I want to see what will happen next ^.^=
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  • From ANON - ChaosD on September 22, 2005
    this was a good start, but you might need to go back over it and fix the grammar errors and it looked like you had a lot of words that were missing in sentences, but besides that i liked it, update soon
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  • From ANON - Kags on September 22, 2005
    please update soon
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