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Reviews for Infinite Dreams

By : ChibiPorunga
  • From ANON - Michelle on July 12, 2006
    Aw!! Please?! I love stories full of love/ hate relationships and bloody murder! It seemed to be going just fine... Oh well, I won't pester you, but I will be checking back.
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  • From ANON - SuishouTenshi on December 08, 2005
    I'm speaking from the viewpoint of a fangirl and an English major..... yes, using less than common adjective can be annoying to the general public, especially if the words are hard to understand within their contexts. But some of your reviewers were too harsh. I mean, if Shakespeare can invent words, why can't you experiment a little too? If you want pallid to be a noun, then dammit, let it be a noun. After the English dictionary added bootylicious as a word, nothing is impossible anymore.

    Just ignore them, bend to their will a little to appease some of them, but keep your style. It would be too boring if everyone wrote their stories the same way, ne?
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  • From ANON - person on November 21, 2005
    >:D That's just kick ass. Or, as the |337 would say, j00 4r3 7o74| p//n4g3. j00 |{1c|{ 455.
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  • From ANON - foxykittykat on October 15, 2005
    p.s. I'm sorry about your uncle. my heart goes out to you
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  • From ANON - foxykittykat on October 15, 2005
    wow! the first chapter brought tears to my eyes! it's so sad and beautiful at the same time. i love it. please continue.
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  • From ANON - person on October 15, 2005
    Since you're re-working this, I thought that I'd review again. ^_^ You already know that I love this from my previous reviews.
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  • From ANON - Tsu-chan on October 14, 2005
    Much better! ^_^ I loved the first chapter. I was glad you cut down on the adjectives a little bit. There are still a few things that I feel don't completely flow right, but, overall, I think you did an awesome job! *beams at you*

    Keep improving! I'll see you next chapter!


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  • From ChibiPorunga on October 14, 2005
    I have decided to completely wipe out what I have done and go back through it and start from a different angle. Some things will be the same, some will be different. But, due to the recent death of my uncle I'm not sure exactly when I'll be getting around to doing it >.
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  • From ANON - foxykittykat on October 14, 2005
    is the idea gonna be the same? i hope so. i love it, bye
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  • From ANON - lexi on October 11, 2005
    your story is by FAR the best ive ever read! the vocabulary is outstanding, i mean who would think to put the scientific name of your jaw!! i understood perfectly the whole thing, but when i shared this with my coworker, she had to google some words, Wunderful!! thank you for writing this.

    *lexi
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  • From ANON - cabbit on October 07, 2005
    could you just please update!!!
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  • From ANON - person on October 07, 2005
    Knarly! That 'twas awesome. Great chapter. ^_^ So cool. I can't wait for the next one. ^_^
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  • From ANON - VenusOfHeaven on October 07, 2005
    Hi!! I think this fic is... extrangely seductive. You know, the situation is so awkward, and, yet, it feels so... arousing. you know, your writing is wonderful. Please continue writing soon. I'll be reading you.
    And please I'm sorry for my worse than awful English, but I'm not an English speaker. In fact, I have only been studying English for a year and a half, but I don't think you made so much mistakes as the other say. I could understand you, what is more than the most of times I am able to.
    Bye!!
    By the way, my real name is Patricia (I'm Spanish), and I think you don't need a beta, you need that application in the "word", you know, that which corrects your grammar and underline mistakes.
    Sorry for the long rewiew, but... are you going to make Sesshomaru totally insane? And Inuyasha, is he going to accept his brother's advances?
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  • From ANON - VenusOfHeaven on October 07, 2005
    Hi!! I think this fic is... extrangely seductive. You know, the situation is so ankward, and, yet, it feels so... arousing. you knoe, your writing is wonderfu. Please continue writing soon.
    and please I'm sorry for my horrible English, but I'm not an English speaker.
    Bye!!
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  • From ANON - Chibi-Porunga on October 07, 2005
    I actually have someone who has been checking through my story for me and is guiding me along. Sad to say, we have only gotten up and through the first few chapters, but the changes are coming along at a decent pace. We're both extremely busy...

    I have debated the uses of the words leered and pampered I dont know how many times - they are being used in the right context. "Leered" has nothing to do with anything sexually. "Pampered" can be used in replace of caress, grace, ect. Maybe I should just use "canoodle" somewhere...

    I do appreciate your opinoins/views/knowledge, ect.

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