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Reviews for Artificial Love

By : TLia
  • From Rina76 on January 09, 2006
    Your latest chapter is full of plenty of emotion, as usual. So painful! So angsty! I like the fact that you write an actual story, as opposed to mindless boinking. And you can tell the characters really care for each other. And your bad guys are so evil! It's a very enthralling universe that you create. Good writing, girl.

    PS. Huge thanks for all the reviews you've given me. Woah. You must have reviewed every story I've written. I'm surprised your eyes are not falling out of your skull by now!
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  • From ANON - Jo on January 02, 2006
    Aw poor Miroku, how can he ask such a question! Inuyasha will probably throwing a fit or something like he usually does. I know I would... I'm guilty of killing characters in a lot of my stories... Oh well... I'm addicted to this story of yours keep up the awesome job! ^_^
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  • From ANON - VenusOfHeaven on January 02, 2006
    Poor, poor Miroku... And don't think that flying to Canada or Mexico will help you to avoid me!!!! I speak both Spanish and English (although pathetically)!!!
    Well, this chapter was really angst, I must say. Miroku will die... sniff. Inuyasha should better put in use that pretty head of his and think about a solution, and quickly. I vote for him to search Sesshoumaru, grab him by one of his ears and drag him again to Miroku. Then, make Sesshoumaru use Tenseiga on the monk. And, finally, kick Sesshoumaru's ass directly to Sango, as a present for her (hehehe, couldn't forget that part).
    Happy new year (a bit late, but, well, you see, you didn't update sooner)

    Bye!
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  • From darkangel985 on December 23, 2005
    It took me eons to finally read your story and what can I say...I love it.
    Especially that you have Kagome turn to Koga instead of going evil like she does in many Inuyasha yaois.
    Hope you keep writing.
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  • From ANON - rina on December 23, 2005
    Another great chapter, so full of hidden meanings and feelings just below the surface. I like your style. You have a wonderful way with words that describes everything so perfectly and to the point without excess rambling (like i tend to do!) I really get the sense of the magical and mysterious when reading your work.

    And yes, I'm from Australia. Very clever of you to have figured that out!

    Ah, you found my actor fic. Oh boy, if you start to read Unscripted, let me warn you, it's very bloody long! I mean, not just the whole thing - each chapter is long too. And there's 24 of them so far. You got to be committed to getting through it all! But I think you'll like it. It'll be something for you to read while you're at work. ;)
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  • From ANON - VenusOfHeaven on December 14, 2005
    You... you... How could you dare tolose one of my rewiews!!!!!!!! Don't worry,I have my hand finenow and now I am able to drown you in rewiews properly.
    I think this chapter is good, truly good, and I can see the fires of a Sango/Sexymaru relationship coming inthe horizon...
    Well, until next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 14, 2005
    Well i loved the story. And if u need bail money, just ask me I'm loaded. ^_^. I dont mean to flame, just thought id let ya know that the idea of M-preg. heavily disturbs me. Anyway I'll bail ya out, but only if you write some more.
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  • From ANON - Jo on December 08, 2005
    Lol great story ^_^ I loved it!!!!
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  • From Crya2Evans on December 08, 2005
    Naughty.. naughty boys for sneaking into Kagome's pack... look at all the trouble they caused! But on a lighter note... how very hot the two of them are together. There's just something about two boys getting it on over and over again... sighs. Anyways. Great fic! Can't wait to read more! Interesting concept and it makes me wonder if you're going to try and knock one of 'em up again... just a thought... don't really like Kagome much you know...
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  • From ANON - Taptai on November 30, 2005
    Ok, now I have to ask, are you gonna throw koga in the mix, cause as much as I want to see some nice demon/hanyou/human action I can almost see him fitting in with kagome better, at least in this fic. Is one of the boys going to wind up pregnant- again I guess that was so sad you killed off the baby, or course it would have been hilarious to see a 9-month miroku going around begging the girls to bear his child, oh I wish I could draw.
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  • From ANON - OnyxLight on November 26, 2005
    OH I justa can't believe you stopped there!!!! This story is awesome!!!
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  • From ANON - VenusOfHeaven on November 23, 2005
    Poor Miroku, he's sure brokenafter this, but there's always a bit of hope, isn't it?
    Good resolution of the chapter, well written and,as always, interesting.

    Waiting anxiously for more!!!!!!!

    Venus
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  • From VenusOfHeaven on November 14, 2005
    How could you??????? You are not going to kill Miroku, no way. I don't mind a bit of suffering, or lots of suffering, but don't kill the poor boy. By the way, what did you do to the poor boy? Prepare him to bear children? Making him sterile? Erasing his memories? Powering his Kazaana? What?

    (All this time you can see Venus looking anxiously at the screen of her computer, bowing to drown in rewiew Immortality Lost if she does not update soon!)
    I think that most of the rwiews of this story are mine, aren't they?

    Waiting for the next chapter (I
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  • From ANON - OnyxLight on November 12, 2005
    VERY VERY GOOD!! ....evil cliffy though...can't wait for the next chappie
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  • From ANON - Queenoftheskies99 on November 12, 2005
    I like this story so far, but I hate that you put a cliff-hanger!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DAMN YOU!!!!!!!!!!! *Deep Breath*
    I'm sorry...*cough* Please update soon!
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