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By : taptai
  • From ANON - Kira on February 11, 2006
    omg....you made me cry so hard... T_T i hate you! but i still love the story. even if it does end here (which would make me very sad) i am still going to tell everyone i know to read it T_T
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  • From ANON - Nanaka on February 04, 2006
    EPILOGUE!!... THAT'S THE WORD I COULDN'T REMEMBER!!... hehehe.... figures it would take me 24 hours to remember a word, i always remember things when i no longer care about them
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  • From ANON - Vampyre Hybrid on February 03, 2006
    he, he DIED! YOU WENCH! BRING HIM BACK! HE'S NOT ALLOWED TO DIE! (if u can't tell, i want this story to continue)
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 03, 2006
    For the most part I found your story to be entertaining. A little slow in some places, yet I kept reading to see what would happen. I thought you did a fairly good job with keeping Inuyasha in character, which I know is hard to do. I found Taptai’s past to be rather odd, yet again I continued to read to see how all of this would turn out. I have to say, I thought the ending was very contrived. I would actually call it lame. For all points of your story, Naraku hasn’t even shown up. There was no hint of him nearby, or that the group was even searching for him. It truly just feels like a ploy writer’s use. Instead of it coming out of the blue, at least let the reader know that for some reason Naraku is surfacing. Even pushing that aside, they were suppose to be in a cave right? This other notion then that Taptai or Inuyasha for that matter didn’t notice a tentacle coming into the cave, or through the ground, or however it made it into the cave is just bizarre. Since for that matter, cats are more sensitive to vibrations than dogs. Taptai, no matter how hazy he might have been would have noticed something was wrong. The ending falling into the ocean thing… wow. Shouldn’t Taptai’s main goal have been to make it back to where Inuyasha was? So he’s getting pushed away, put not making any of his own headway back to where he wants to be? He’s really that bad at fighting? And now he drowns in the ocean? Again, most people aren’t caught off guard by the ocean. It’s something people smell, hear, and feel before they actually see it. Maybe somehow if he fell over a cliff of some kind it might seem slightly more plausible; however, I would think he would have noticed well in advance that Naraku was pushing him closer to water. Effectively, your story feels unfinished. Maybe with some revisions of the ending fight scene you could resolve it, but I would be more inclined to believe that it would require a couple more chapters to actually bring the story to a proper climax and resolution.
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  • From ANON - Nanaka on February 03, 2006
    that was a good chapter... pooe Taptai.... i think it would be nice if you made a (dangit i forgot what the word was, i want to say prologue but that aint right), anyway i think one last chapter just (aww man i forgot another word).... i'll try one more time, i think you should write one last chapter that basically goes over the after effects and how Inuyasha is dealing and stuff, cause the way this chapter ended it just didn't feel like the end... if you don't want to thats fine, I'll live.... I loved this story
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  • From ANON - white-devil hell-hound on February 02, 2006
    Sorry! My mistake I meant....Taptai. I'm not pissed anymore!

    *HAPPY*
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  • From ANON - white-devil hell-hound on February 02, 2006
    YOU have tu FINISH this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You can't just stop like that!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please don't let Taipai die and I want this to be a happy ending!


    *Please note that endings like these piss me off!*
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  • From ANON - MEMEMEMEMEME on February 01, 2006
    CONTINUE!!!!!!! WHAt Happens to INUYASHA?? What does Naraku do to him??? >,
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  • From ANON - Immortaity lost on February 01, 2006
    You killed off your charachter just like i did! I should warn you the readers don't take too kindly to that. From personal experience yano. I have to write more story to appease my fans. But it was good, surprising but definately good. I wonder if Inu will die as well. You said that he was bleeding a lot and human. Oh well. You opted for the cliffie ending so i guess the world will never know. I loved the chapter btw, just a bit stunned that Taptai is actually dead. Oh god, the tail part! I'm so glad that I dont have a tail now, owowowowwww. Thankies for your review at gunpoint btw. Theres a new chapter out for your perusal so check that out if ur not too busy. See ya when I see ya!
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  • From ANON - Kira on December 18, 2005
    VERY GOOD CHAPTER!!! WOOO!!! i like the ending, A LOT!! and i cant wait to see what 'tomorrow' brings. ;-D

    oh, and i FINALLY replyed to the E-mail you sent me a while back. Im hope your not like me and let your mail PILE UP before you read any of them... ^_^; oh, and if you have a gaia account, tell em what it is in the email! ^_^

    I LOVE THIS STORY!!! WOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!

    ~Kira

    PS. oh, and if you could (you dont have to) make the story more dark-ish. like have a tradety happen...either that or make it really funny. ^_^;;; im a weird-o... XD
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  • From ANON - Sianeka on December 12, 2005
    I am enjoying this story, haven't read one with a cat-demon with Inuyasha before. I like Taptai, I think you have created a character here with a strongly developed personality. The feelings between the two hanyou are believable, and that is so great. Too many times, the lemon occurs even though the storyline hasn't ever explained why the two paired ever are attracted to each other. Just "something about that person, can't get them out of my head" baloney, never a compelling reason why the two would be attracted. This story isn't like that.

    I'm wondering where this will go? Where do you plan to take this and how will it play out? Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 09, 2005
    Things are getting hot and heavy! I'm glad that Taptai decided to mate with Inu. Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Krazykait on December 09, 2005
    Lovin' the story so far. Can't wait for your next update.
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  • From ANON - Rawben on December 09, 2005
    ohhh yey! that was a great chapter!! and i'm glad they work so well together! horrible spot to end hte chapter tho! :( ...update soon!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Nanaka on December 09, 2005
    Another wonderfull chapter... keep up the good work
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