Click Here!

Reviews for Into The Future

By : DWrecked
  • From ANON - DarkNinja on January 20, 2006
    ohh haha lol >.> k that was funny :P

    but true... don't pay attention to that moron >.>

    uhh, i just noticed somthing in the fight between inu and sess >.> he uses "backlash wave" (another lame translation) to finish him off >.> he can't use backlash wave unleash his enemy uses a energy charged attack (energy beam, energy ball... jouki channeled stuff basicly...)

    PEACE OUT! GREAT STORY!!! HAIL D_Rose-sama! *bows*
    Report Review

  • From ANON - DarkNinja on January 20, 2006
    well that was cool ^^ i LOVE to pair up Inuyasha and Shiori :P

    i didn't really found anything in your story that was bad... only one, and that was the spelling >.>

    you type heir wrong two times, and it is different both times >.> my english aren't perfect either, but if you tried to use word instead, all those mistakes would probably be corrected :P

    and one thing more... i know basic japanese, and many makes that mistake..

    inuyasha's sword, aren't called Tetsusaiga... its called Tessaiga...

    if his sword was actually called Tetsusaiga, Sesshomaru would have been called Setsumaru, which would really sound stupid :P i can't explain it, when i can't show the way it is spelled though...

    even if they actually spell it like that in the english manga's it is because they are morons >.> i don't know where the hell they got "wind scar" from >.> it is called wound of the wind, or "kaze no kizu" and for some reason, "kazaana" (Miroku's void thing in his hand) is translated "air void" which doesn't make sense at all >.>

    sorry to disappoint you guys, but the translators that translated inuyasha from japanese into english, either smokes a "little" too much before they start, or else they simply felt like changing the names to make fun of the poor manga readers and anime freaks >.>
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Kiranta on December 21, 2005
    Nice, glad to see this pairing
    Report Review

  • From ANON - K on November 16, 2005
    Just ignore "Bill the Surly" he must have not gotten any from his boyfriend. I saw some spelling errors but that doesn't matter I've seen worse......much worse........there isn't much wrong with it other than the fact he doesn't agree with how you wrote some things so you should ignore the court jester and keep writing. :)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - K on November 16, 2005
    please please update, your story is very well done and I can't wait read the next chapter.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - janomaru on November 06, 2005
    keep it up

    and stop it with the evil cliffys

    update soon

    Report Review

  • From ANON - puff on November 06, 2005
    WOW THIS WAS AWSOME!!!!!!!!!! great lemon not just your same o'l wham bam thank you ma'm and that's all she wrote! stuff OoOo wonder what Shiori will think of inu being lord of the western lands and most importantly WILL THERE BE LEMON IN THE NEXT CHAPPIE!!!!!!!!! POWER TO THE LEMON!!!!!!
    .................sorry...........i'll try and control my out bursts............... and my intake of suger.... heh heh heh ..............

    your number one fan puff!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Rider on November 06, 2005
    bravo a wonderful story so far and a pleasantly refreshing couple looking forward to another chapter

    Report Review

  • From ANON - madnarutofan on November 05, 2005
    ahhhh, refreshing lemon flavored sex. nice.... oh well, I thought it was a very well-written scene , plus, Ithink the description of Shiori was just dam HOT. I'm guessing she's the new lady of the western lands now... oh well.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - AJ on November 05, 2005
    *sighs* This was a fantastically original idea for a story, and I really looked forward to reading it. Now I wish I hadn't. Inuyasha spent months/years with both Kikyo and Kagome without ever saying the words "I love you", why would he say them after 2 minutes with Shiori? I couldn't even bring myself to finish reading this one, the spelling, grammatical and common typos were getting worse, as obviously you are trying to post chapters more quickly, and not allowing time to at least proof-read them beforehand. I understand that you probably killed Sesshomaru off so that Inuyasha could live in relative peace, but the fight between the brothers was a little contrived. My main concern with this fic is the pace of the action: slow it down a little, please! This is still a good idea for a story, but I think you should go back over it and correct the errors and try to expand a little, build the feelings between Inuyasha and Shiori instead of just throwing them together for the sake of writing a "lemon" chapter.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Bill the Surly on November 05, 2005
    To be quite frank, this story is somewhere between bad and postively dreadful.

    List of offences:

    (X) OOC
    (X) Bad Grammar
    (X) Bad Syntax
    (X) Bad Spelling
    (X) Homonym Abuse
    (X) Improbable Events. --The ghost of Inu no Taishou congratulating Inuyasha on beating up his brother? Please. In fact, the concept of whole Inuyasha taking over the western lands borders on moronic. Even if he could have beaten Sesshoumaru, the other demons would never accepted a hanyou ruler. Period.
    (X) Punctuation Abuse.
    (X) Mate Marking. Why do you people think this is sexy?
    (X) Improbable Sex Acts Uh.. huh, Inuyasha is hung like a horse, but his woman doesn't feel any discomfort.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - puff on October 29, 2005
    Wow someone thinks i'm a groupie!! OoOo but anyway great solo lemon lol i hope that will be lemon in the next chappie! weeeee LEMON power.......... sorry sugar high!!

    your number one fan puff
    Report Review

  • From ANON - janomaru on October 29, 2005
    keep writing or else i will hunt you down and hurt you till you finish

    it's that good
    Report Review

  • From ANON - madinuyashafan on October 28, 2005
    Hey, I love this story! I think it's a great set of twists and turns! I think it would also be funny if Kanna showed up and tried to seduce Inuyasha away from Shiori
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Shadow Wolf on October 23, 2005
    Hmm... very nice so far, although I don't like the format too much(Thats just a personal opinion) You have two very nicely written chapters here, not only that but no OoCness
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!