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Reviews for Day and Night

By : Nahaujaret
  • From ANON - C'Asia on October 27, 2006
    whoa it cant happen like that i
    mean not to sess but i hope you
    update this story soon i want to
    know what will happen next
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  • From ANON - RubyLi on October 27, 2006
    REVIEW ON CHAPTER 1:

    I love your story -^-^- I live in Chicago w00t ! And I'm asian >_> But only 1/3 Japanese.
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  • From ANON - diego on September 29, 2006
    hey...im not the type of guy to complain..but your september 22 is far now..so how and when is comming the next chapter...maybe im puting a little to much pressure but still I love your story so keep update and keep it good! ( good do I now that, that is not simple but I trust you ) see ya
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  • From ANON - Birman on September 29, 2006
    Exactly, like you said, many Japanese hate to be mistaken for Chinese, etc. because they are racist (like the ones who mistake their identity) and think Chinese are below them. Like Rin says in here, "I ain’t no mothafuckin chink", which implies she's racist, and thinks she, being Japanese, is way above a "chink" in the social hierachy. Which makes her a major hypocrite, BTW.
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  • From ANON - Kuronekochyan on August 27, 2006
    I nearly cried. It was that bad. To be honest, I didn't really read through the entire "slang" section, I couldn't really make myself do it. I couldn't put myself through that sort of torture. It was like... migrains in word form. Or needles stabbing my brain through my eyes in word form. Something along those lines.

    As for the racial thing, it was bad. There's around 10 paragraphs of text above my comment to let you know exactly what I think of you, and the whole racism thing. But one point that I must make is this: although you may be African American, and although you may have been oppressed in history, pretty much everyone for some reason or another has as well. That does not make being ignorant about other racial issues beyond your own okay. Read up on it.

    Odie: If everyone could just "get over" issues, we wouldn't have war now would we? The War in Iraq wouldn't happened if USA just "got over" 9.11. Or what about WW1? If Austria got over the Black Hand killing their Archduke, WW1 wouldn't have happened. And tell family friends that had family killed and raped in the Japanese invasion of Nanjing to just "get over it." I'm not saying that I'm against Japanese people, I'm part Japanese somewhere along the line, I've come to get over it.

    Tense, sentence structure, grammar, vocabulary all need improvement. Consider getting a beta, or read over your stories again. I can't think of anyone that is stupid enough or masochistic enough to do it, but I'm sure there's SOMEONE out there that can do it.
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  • From mixedsweetnezz on August 24, 2006
    Wow, your story is very interesting.
    But i think the slang and such is a bit too much.
    I m african american and korean, and I think this whole racial thing is a bit too much. People, get over it. Its not that big of a deal!
    I think your story is very interesting.
    I give you credit for still keeping this story up, and still writing this,while putting up with all this nonsense and crap people are giving you.
    great job
    :D
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  • From ANON - kagome2004 on August 23, 2006
    i am sure the next chapter will be just as breath taking as the other chapters...keep it up
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  • From ANON - nevaeh azalea on August 23, 2006
    ahhhhhh!!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - washusha on August 19, 2006
    i hope your not going to let it sit. if u are it was a great fic. its just to bad that its finished.
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  • From ANON - Atchan on August 16, 2006
    Enlighten me, what was the point of the whole "Japanese" conversation? I can't see the point of the conversation that could not have been held in English. Most people don't approach asian people and pick a language, and hope that they're going to respond in kind. I kinda... didn't like it. At all. No offense to you as a person, but more of you as a writer. A bit (read: a lot) of polish and some (read: a lot) more work and it'll be alright.

    Btw, "slang" is rather difficult to read. At least use apostrophes to show missing letters. That and punctuation is good. For example, thoughts can be enclosed in single quotation marks, that kind of basic thing.
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  • From ANON - laura on August 16, 2006
    Ilove the story (day and night)
    I'm hoping that something good will come up.
    Like what would Kagura do when she finds out and stuff
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  • From ANON - black iris on August 13, 2006
    no offence to anyone who may out this but dont let rin get pregnant.. that happens in sooo many storys ppl will think its unorigonal. now its different if u get her pregnant and he denys the baby but that is also common. maybe have one of her 'crew' members turn on her and attack her? nobody will exspect it and its origional. maybe have naraku come into it or rin get shot (since shes hard an shit.) or... maybe have kagura come back and shoot her? theres some ideas hope to see an update!!
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  • From ANON - chrissy on August 12, 2006
    i love it that was one of the best inu fics i read please update soon
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  • From ANON - Alexsis on August 12, 2006
    Yo shit is tight! Im lovin dis story and fuck those bitches they say shit on your reviews shit Im a Beaner just like break so i know wat u taking about XD and for those Stoopid mother fukers that do not like whats in this story then how about this DON'T READ IT it's as simple as that don't get mad and start writing crap about its a bad story just stop reading and find something that is allowed in your little boxed world... I'll be waiting for your next chapter ^ ^
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  • From ANON - michi on August 11, 2006
    i love your story and i think you should have Rin get pregnant XD or maybe have it look like Sess cheat on Rin and her watching that or have Sess find out he's engaged XD those are just ideas but i do hope you continue with this story it is really good
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