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By : sesshomarunaraku
  • From itasas1 on September 16, 2007
    i love this story so far please update.
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  • From MiguelKaiLover on June 06, 2007
    great story! :D please continue! i really like it! sesshy is a hottie! XD

    ~Fly-chan~
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  • From ANON - demon cat on July 06, 2006
    This is a GOOD start. GOOD JOB! Please update soon.I love your story.I want to know what will happen to Sesshy.^_^
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  • From ANON - ying on July 05, 2006
    Oh,come on,dear author.Please,please update sooner if you are still alive^_^. I love this story,I want to read more.So,write something...ok?

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  • From ANON - ying on June 24, 2006
    Please update SOONER!!!!!!PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE?!
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  • From ANON - YING on June 22, 2006
    Whoa.This is so good!!!!!!I can not wait to see how you pull this out.
    So my dear author I love your story!!!Please continue!!!Please,please,please?
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 08, 2006
    dAMMIT i have been waiting 2 weeks for the next chapter, please write soon cause i am not a patient person
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  • From ANON - Goddness of Evil on December 25, 2005
    Please update this story!
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  • From ANON - ~ on December 22, 2005
    u gotta update....it's very interesting
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  • From ANON - god of insanity on December 20, 2005
    I can help be your beta. Beta is someone who helps correct grammar and spelling, am I correct? I am very good in that department. I can help you, if you should want it...
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  • From ANON - dreamfool on December 20, 2005
    PPS if you'd like a second beta i can be reached at Heyashleyjude@AOL.com
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  • From ANON - dreamfool on December 20, 2005
    this is really a beautiful story. i do have some constructive criticism. please don't take this as an attack or flame. it's siple some advice.

    it desperatly needs a beta. or at least a thorough look over before posting it.
    next thing. i love how you gave a history of Sesshoumaru's mother and father. it was totally helpful. and the term explainations made it much easier.
    i sorta had a hard time following the sequence of events. a little more detail would definatley to polish it up and easier to follow.
    consider rewriting it. the story line is excellent and i'm excited to read the next part (Update soon please).

    if having a beta is uncomfortable i recommend using these techniques for critiqeuing the story:

    1) try writing it on a computer program first
    2) make a rough draft. look it over. check for any errors; spell check is a life savor
    3) set it down for awhile then go back. this allows for a fresh perspective. it makes it easier to spot any mistakes.
    4) most importantly try looking at it from the point of view of a reader. is the wording understandable (no jumbled sentences)? does it make sense?

    this story is going to be awsome anyways but these hints might help a little.
    with good intentions and lots of love,
    Dreamfool

    PS i had to look this review over three times before it made any since.
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  • From ANON - anon on December 20, 2005
    I'm always online, I'd be glad to beta for you if the offer still stands. (email me at akaichi1313@yahoo.com if interested)
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  • From ANON - N/A on November 28, 2005
    Hey good story (I love Sesshy, he's my favorite character...who's very hot lol) but for some reason I love it when the poor, poor sexy demon gets raped *cries*. Anyway, you're doing fine, but it's a little rushed. You may want to consider a beta. (I have no life and am home all day, so I'd be happy to help ya ^.~)
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  • From ANON - psycho demon witch on November 21, 2005
    please update soon!
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