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Reviews for Broken Sword

By : AlterAlchemist
  • From ANON - sma_orlando on December 24, 2014
    Please finish this really great story.
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  • From kagome42218 on February 23, 2012
    its been so long since you have updated please continue with this i love your plot for the story.
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  • From WiccanQueen on February 15, 2011
    Please update soon
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  • From Sessholord on April 26, 2009
    MMmmmmmmmm Great story!! Please continue!!
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  • From nm1716 on October 22, 2007
    I like this story and would like to see it continued. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

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  • From ANON - CrimsonInHumanBloodForever- Too lazy to log in on August 19, 2006
    Wow I really love this story, the first chapter is really well written.. But why did InuYasha go back to his own time?
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  • From ladykumorioftherose on August 18, 2006
    Great story! Hey are you going to add any more chapters?
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  • From ANON - anymomous on May 20, 2006
    WRITE MORE PLEASE IT IS A GREAT STORY SO PLEASE WRITE AT LEAST ONE OTHER CHAPTER TO SUM IT ALL UP THANX
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 30, 2006
    OMG SESSHOMARU

    i thought that it was inuyasha that was hurt but then i read your summary and it said at the end that inuyasha was in control and i wondered how?

    sesshomaru was the one who got hurt and omg

    when i read it i gasped and tears came to my eyes as i saw sesshomaru lying on the ground like that and broken and it looked like naraku did that to him. i thought what happend to sesshomaru to make him this way. he wouldn't let someone as low as naraku to defeat him or do this to him.

    then inuyasha killed naraku and i was pleasently surprised that inuyasha was doing very well for himself in kagome's era and world. i also like how inuysha has become more seriouse and calm and how he has grown up.

    when sesshomaru started to cry i was shocked and angry at whoever or whatever had done this to him and how did he get like this? sesshomaru is the lord of the western lands and a proud and honorable taiyoukai. who has no match in speed or stregnth but apparently someone was able to break him and leave him in this terrifying condition.

    will sesshomaru and inuyasha make love in the next chapter or will sesshomaru heal and both of them along with there friends go and plan out and take revenge against sesshomaru's attacker.

    i want sesshomaru and inuyasha and the whole inu-tachi group and kouga to plan out and take revenge against the eastern lord and slay his family and his children and loyal friends and servants too. leave no one loyal to the eastern lord alive. that includes his cousins and brothers and sisters and uncles and anyone else that there might be too.

    sesshomaru will take over the eastern lands and regain his place in the western lands but he is still lord of the western lands and they were looking for there lord when he didn't return. they are loyal and are ready to fight and kill all of those loyal to the eastern lord.

    that's just my fantasy and my anger at whoever did this to sesshomaru because that person must die. the most painful death imaginable.

    then sesshomaru should start building corporations and other buisnesses and companies too. so that he can live in kagome's era as a very very wealthy buisness man. taisho corporations or taisho corps. so that he can still be the lord of the western lands and live in the future as well.

    that's what i think should happen after they have there revenge and inuyasha and sesshomaru fall in love with each other. they live together and maybe inuyasha could have pups because he's a hanyou and anything is possible. plus the two of them having pups would be a great ending but let the story play out during inuyasha pregnancy and the birth of the pups and you could give the pups japanes names of course and then sesshomaru and inuyasha and the pups go home and as a surprise for inuyasha sesshomaru has a very big nursery built for the pups that has a closet for each of the pups with clothes in them and shoes and other things too. the cribs and colors and decorations are from the western lands with demons fighting on the ceiling and dog demons on the walls. the pups have there own private bathing spring and the design is like the accual western lands with trees and flowers and small ponds and hot springs. special caves that lead into miniature paradises and other things. the bathing room is very large and well constructed and very safe for the pups.

    he shows inuyasha all this and inuyahsa just smiles and kisses his mate. they put the pups down to sleep and sesshomaru carries inuyasha into there bed chambers and closes the door. sesshomaru starts to undress inuyasha slowly nuzzling inuyasha's neck and his mating mark,then travels down to his chest where he grazes inuyasha's nipples gently lapping at them then suckling them hard, making his mate moan loudly.

    well you can use your imagination for the rest^^

    its just my fantasy as i said before^^

    so great story so far

    hope to see and update soon

    onegai update soon onegai

    see ya round

    ja ne
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 23, 2006
    WRITE MORE YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 07, 2006
    i loved it but you need to keep going you cant just stop
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 27, 2005
    ^^ Yay, you updated! *claps* I hope to see a chapter 6 soon and...to help ya a bit, rape victims usually don't get over it for a while, so don't have him recover within like weeks. Anyway you're doing great and please update soon ^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 14, 2005
    update soon please

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  • From on November 30, 2005
    I like how the story is coming along so far. I can't wait to read the lemon with Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru.
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  • From ANON - Psycho Demon-Witch on November 23, 2005
    please update soon!
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