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By : Xakana
  • From ANON - chanda on January 20, 2006
    Great update, sorry to hear about your bad luck, I do hope things turn around for you. Glad bad boy was back in the chapter, what a coward.

    Chanda
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  • From ANON - inu5 on January 20, 2006
    wow iliked the story the plot and every thing hurry up and update thanks
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  • From ANON - LauReN on January 18, 2006
    This is a really good story. I like the plot. I hope you update soon!

    ~LauReN
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  • From ANON - pat on January 17, 2006
    o JEEZE MAN THIS IS SO REAL!!!!!!!
    ive never seen as good writeing for along time and my friend u just broke that
    this is singale handenly the best storie i have evre read
    plz by god contine

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  • From ANON - "fan of kagome" (now) cute mica on January 17, 2006
    UPDATE SOON ! ! ! !
    I REALLY CANT GET ENOUGH OF UR STORY :-)
    SO PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE SOON ! ! ! !

    ttfn;
    MEGAN
    scence most of th words r capitals i switched it LOL :-)
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  • From ANON - lost child on January 13, 2006
    uum...man it feels like this ended all so quickly...one minute i'm reading then the next i'm done, but my clock clearly shows it's taken me about an hour and a half to read this whole story...dang I hope you update quick too, I like this story.
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  • From ANON - lost child on January 13, 2006
    My quote: you know a story is good when you feel your only 5 chapters into the story and your actually a lot further. Well that's exactly what I thought when I actually paid attention to what chapter I was on I was about 6 chapters ahead of what I thought I was. It doesn't seem like I had been reading this story for very long, but the look on the computer clock tells me otherwise. Awesome story. Truely moving
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  • From ANON - joy on January 12, 2006
    whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa update now whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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  • From ANON - Poppy on January 11, 2006
    you know I don't review this story enough, and come to think of it, this might even be the first review, but just wanted to say that I'm still loving this story, and keep checking constantly to see if you've updated.
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  • From ANON - joy on January 08, 2006
    yayyyyyyy more more more plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz heehee cant wait till next chapter
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  • From ANON - Al on January 07, 2006
    Me again. I saw some of the other reviews and realized I messed up bad. My bad. You probably had the whole story planned out and here I was giving you advise. Sorry Im such a lunatic. Well Im still waiting for those other chapters so keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Al on January 07, 2006
    Alright this is my first time doing something like this and I don't know if Im doing it right. If reviews are for helping your chapters out

    then I might have some useful advise. How about trying to put some more action to this story by making Yukio and Kagome meet

    again. Lets say Inu and Kag were walking one day and Inu suddenly sees him. Inu asks to take another route and Kag

    wonders why? Since Inu doesn't tell her anything, she insists on going the same route when suddenly she sees him. ( Yukio still

    isn't aware that their watching). Kagome starts getting flashbacks and begins to feel ill. Inu grabs her on goes the opposite way. Yukio

    turns and watches as they leave thinking" its him again". "This is the moment I've been waiting for". Inu turns to an alley with no

    people and checks on Kagome. Suddenly he hears a voice that says " well, well, well, if it isn't my bitch and the fucker who fucked my

    head up." Inuyasha turns angrily and says " how dare you show your face around me again" as he stands up. "Whoa" says Yukio. " I

    was just trying to say hello to the woman I made sweet, sweet love to". "You bastard" says Inuyasha trying to calm himself down. "

    Your lucky I don't want to hurt you in front of Kagome, but if I have to I will." Now you have two choices. You can either walk away

    peacefully right now or I'll fuck you up again." Kagome opens her eyes and sees Yukio take a gun out. (Inuyasha obviously doesn't

    know what it is).

    Well here are some ideas and if I wasn't supposed to comment I'm sorry. I kinda don't know what I'm doing. I hope you can think

    about it and if you don't use any of my ideas its cool. I won't be offended. Just trying to help out a little. Well if there are any

    questions about me telling you the rest of my ideas or about anything, email me. ( I'm not sure if my email is going to show so if you

    don't respond, i wont be offended). I really don't watch that much anime but Inuyasha rocks and so does this story. The best part is

    the romance and thats what I look for in animation that I watch. This might of sounded femanine but Im a guy just to clear anything

    up. Well thats it, I hope I can get a response and I can't wait to finish reading this story. Keep up the good work and thanks for your

    time. (That is if you read my review). By the way this is the best story I've read compared to the other ones. Just telling you to see if

    it helps.
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  • From ANON - anon on January 06, 2006
    Nice story. in chapter 17 you have this really long line ___________________ that goes all the way across the page it makes it so you have to scroll a bit to the left to finish reading the text if you shorten it that would help.

    Anyway keep writing this is great story I am glad Inu was able to find Kagome after she was taken I hope her baby is ok. Also glad Inuyasha was able to beat the crap outta that guy for what he did since the police didn't do anything just because they thought it was Kagome's fault. Rather backwards thinking if you ask me. Update soon

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  • From ANON - Bill on January 06, 2006
    Lets remember Miroku in theory shouldn't have his spirtual powers either as he isn't pure either. Yet he still has them.
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  • From ANON - third eye's mind on January 06, 2006
    Here's hoping this might contribute something to the story. Although a miko can be translated to mean a temple virgin, in actual japanese it can also be translated into a a female with spiritual powers who embodies the purity of her heart, soul and body. So in a way Kagome should still have some miko powers to her. If you're wondering how I know this, well I am japanese and do have several members of my family as actual mikos as well as priests.
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