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Reviews for A Rickety Bridge

By : stetsuntam
  • From ANON - quirkyslayer (NSI) on January 30, 2006
    I love it! Such quality work here, and I've recommended it to others. You do the Miroku/Sango canon pairing so much justice. Excellent work.
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  • From ANON - blackberry on January 22, 2006
    This is really, really good. I love the job you're doing on the characterization, and the fact that you're extrapolating off a specific incident from the manga delights me! I love stories with plot, and a lemon with plot is amazing! Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Sarah on January 21, 2006
    What an awesome fic! You are a good writer, keep up the great work! And update soon... what a cliffy you left me with ;)
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  • From ANON - Kaoru2153 on January 21, 2006
    ^_^x This is a good story. I can't believe that little twurp lied about something like that. And worst of all Miroku not saying anything! *sigh* He's such a perv. But Sango should definatly give him a chance. I mean giving up on the person you love is hard and just because he has a bad track record doesn't mean he'll be all that bad. ^_^ Please continue this story! I really like it!
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  • From fluffy802005 on January 20, 2006
    i like it. keep up the work
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  • From ANON - cjflutterbye on January 16, 2006
    Oh. I like it! I've read the 5 chapters that you have up and would really like to see more - I LOVE/ADORE Sango and Miroku - and I don't find enough stories where they are the primary focus. You have hit on an interesting story line - and I will be certain to keep reading what you post. Thanks for sharing!
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  • From ANON - shiko-chan on January 14, 2006
    argh! i've been spoiled by FFnet's story/author alerts, so it's taken me till now to hunt up your story again. though it's great to come back to not one but three nice new chapters.

    Miroku's seduction of Sango was magnificent. i love how you narrated/described the kiss--it's Sango's first kiss and you really made that point wonderfully. (nothing quite like the first time and all that.) Sango seems to me to be a bit too forgiving, too much of a martyr after Inuyasha and Kagome get back at him for lying to them, but hey, the taijiya seems to be the type to go all out when she falls in love.

    this last chapter (the one with "nushi-sama") was fun and light, pretty different from the preceding chapters but a refreshing change. Shippou blurting out about how Miroku might have confused Shima with some other girl he actually DID "join with" was a great tactic! and i especially enjoyed Miroku's rescue of Sango: "you shit! taking my woman!" hee hee!

    please be so kind as to put me on your e-mail list for updates! ^.^
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  • From ANON - Kera Sheden on January 13, 2006
    Wew, a spin-off of episode 161 - very impressive how you've connected it with your plot. This fic has really caught my attention. I eagerly await the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - David on January 11, 2006
    A few things:

    1) God, I love Shipou.

    2) How come 'nushi-sama' wasn't capitalized except when it was the begining of a sentence?

    3) Can you tell me what 'dono' actually means? The only times I've seen it outside of fan-fiction are in my Peacemaker Kurogane and Rurouni Kenshin mnagas, and in those, it said that it was a term used between samurai of same or similar rank. But everytime I see it in fan fiction, it's usually used to refer to women, and usually in the context of Ms. or Ma'am.
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  • From ANON - chibi_sanoku105 on January 11, 2006
    You just HAD to be one of the good authors who focused on the plot!!!!
    Ugh!!! no sex scenes??? Aww... i mstarting to miss those!! Did you get this chapter off of an Inuyasha episode??? because this chapter seemed kinda familar.....
    ok-ish chapter....
    but I hope the next few would be full of lemons!!!
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  • From ANON - The Rabid Association of Fangirls Pres on January 11, 2006
    Very nice, though you did skip a bit of the action. That's okay, though. It would probably take like three chapters to write the whole thing in its entirity. n.n I love your story. Very hot and very well done. You handle the characters well. And for the record, they DID animate this part of the manga. Episode 161. I have it fansubbed!

    Rabid Fan Girls of the world unite! Inu-Yasha is no longer on 5 days a week... Tear down the walls! Steal all the chairs! Kidnap Adult Swim's toy bunny whiskers! We shall have vengance. Oh sorry. Later!
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  • From ANON - Deep Serenity on January 11, 2006
    Wow, sorry it took me so long!. I loved when Inuyasha smacked the fish demon LOL,

    ANd how Miroku showed he cared when the demon had Sango

    And the end where Sango talks about her complex feelings......well I love it!

    Loved the whole thing really, seriously. Good job
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  • From ANON - Rawben on January 10, 2006
    ohh!! so sad!!! :( ... but good chapter! she's totally right... damn miroku, you're such an ass! lol... but he totally loves her... but how will he prove that to her?
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  • From ANON - Kanami on January 07, 2006
    WOOOOOOOOOW thatwas GOOOD i wannaknow what happens update update update!! keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - chibi_sanoku105 on January 06, 2006
    this wasn't your greatest chapter, I'll admit that.
    Will the next one be a lemon?? Wow, that was really unexpected how Sango didn't try to Attack Miroku. she was just calm. Way too calm though, as if she's hurting inside??
    Update soon please!!~
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