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By : Ladyanimelover
  • From ANON - sma_orlando on December 23, 2014
    Please, please finish this really great story.
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  • From jdbbrz27 on July 26, 2010
    I'm really enjoying this story and I was wondering if you were going to continue with it the plot is interesting and the character Lust is hilarious especially when he calls Inuyasha angel now that is funny especially Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha's reactions to it. I really hope you continue cause I'd like to know what happens next.
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  • From ANON - ShayBoo on December 19, 2006
    OMG i loved reading this. I got annoyed when i realised i had reached the end XD

    PLEASE update this soon!
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  • From ANON - gen on December 07, 2006
    now that they are in the Western Lands' proper
    i was hoping to see additional light to the situation

    the naraku situation can go anywhere if you're keeping the bad guy in character
    i dont know what he wants
    i was hoping it isnt inu - i'm hoping it wont be another rape thing
    unless it's Sess (he's mate, after all...)
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  • From ANON - CrimsonInHumanBloodForever- Too lazy to log in on August 16, 2006
    Wow! its been a while since you have updated!! Tis about time! I hope you put some MPREG in here! That would be awesome!!! I really hope Naraku doesn't make Inu his sex slave. But it makes everything more interesting. But I wouldnt' want IY to be given away to Naraku by Sesshy, that'd be very sads :( :( I really hope you update this soon! I can't wait for more!! I had to reread it to remeber whats going on. But I didn't mind because its a really good story! ^_^ keep it up. But you have minor spelling errors but don't we all!?
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  • From ANON - blackgoblin on August 16, 2006
    nice
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  • From ANON - Lore on February 07, 2006
    wonderful story... it was very fun to read especially the part about Lust
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  • From ANON - Ame on January 31, 2006
    your story is great, please update soon. but btw when sesshomaru found inuyasha after being bitten by Kuro, you wrote that inuyasha said that he had no tensaiga, inuyasha has the tetsusaiga not tensaiga the tensaiga is sesshomaru's.
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  • From ANON - Rawben on January 29, 2006
    another great chapter!! :O love it! especially the sexual tension!!
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  • From ANON - Fluffy on January 28, 2006
    WOWOW! No rape! Poison that was original. I LOVED IT! I'm really getting tired of inuyasha or someone always getting raped in stories. I like your originality...Great chapter. Great story..Please continue! ^_^
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  • From ANON - tanesha on January 27, 2006
    love the story and the chapters are nice and long but what is naraku planning and what does he want inuyasha for?

    in the next chapter there has to be a lemon because sesshomaru is going to bathe at a hot spring and inuyasha is going to folow being curiouse about his brother and still feeling the affects of there kiss.

    he goes to the spring an watches as sesshmaru undresses and walks into the steamy water. sesshomaru notices his mates prescence and smiles. liking the fact that inuyasha hasn't taken his eyes off his body yet and he can smell inuyasha's arousel thick in the air. so sesshomaru decides to give inuyasha a small performance and he starts to stroke himself slowly to ease his aching erection. inuyasha looks on unable to take his eyes from his brothers member as sesshomaru strokes himself to near ecstasy inuyasha can't take it anymore and is going to leave when sesshomaru suddenly grabs him from behind ridding him of his clothes and pulls him into the water and starts to kiss him.

    inuyasha moans and kisses sesshomaru back. sesshomaru starts to explore his brothers body and this elicits moans and wimpers from inuyasha. pleased that he is affecting his mate in this manner begins to stroke his hardend erection. moaning inuyasha thrusts against sesshomaru's hand sesshomaru says "so you like that do you mate?" inuyasha's only response is to moan and continue thrusting into sesshomaru's hand but sesshomaru pulls away and inuyasha wipers and then sesshomaru finds inuyasha's tight entrance and slowly starts to finger it and while entering him careful not to hurt inuyasha with his claws prods his opening and inuyasha groans in pain at the intrusion.

    then sesshomaru finds a very soft spot and begins to rub it. inuyasha moans loudly and bigins to clench around sesshomaru's finger and inuyasha begs for more "sess please" moans inuyasha

    "please what inuyasha?" wanting him to admitt that he wants him

    inuyasha growls in frustration and decides to tell sesshomaru what he wants to hear as sesshomaru puts another finger in inuyasha's opening causing him to moan and thrash about.

    "sess please i need you NOW" inuyasha pleades he mutters 'happy now' under his breatrh

    sesshomaru removes his two finger from inuyasha's opening and positions himself then he looks at inuyasha saying "i'm sorry my mate but this may hurt at first" inuyasha nodds his heard bracing himself for the pain that is to come.

    sesshomaru already wet from the warm water begins to prod inuyasha's opening and slowly the thick head of his member slips in with inuyasha grunting in pain. sesshomaru nuzzling inuyasha's neck saying soft relaxing words into his mate ear. slowly he continued to enter inuyasha inch by inch trying not to cause him too much pain. finally his member was sheathed in all the way.

    the flesh around him felt like warm velvet pulsing and wet. inuyasha was tight and sesshomaru was large so it was a tight fit. snugly wraped inside inuyasha's warm velvet like opening sesshomaru waited for inuyasha to relax and ajust to him being inside. it didn't take inuyasha long to adjust to sesshomaru and soon he bucked his hips back telling sesshomaru that he was ready.

    sesshomaru slowly started to pump in and out in and out of inuyasha,but soon the slow pace was forgeten and inuyasha bucked his hips back moaning "sess please faster harder" moaning sesshomaru's name.

    sesshomaru obliged and started to pump faster and harder in and out of inuyasha's tight entrance.

    inuyasha moaned for him to go even faster and harder and sesshomaru told inuyasha to hold on to to him and sesshomaru used his youkai speed and slamed in and out of inuyasha with a speed no human could match. pounding his mate into oblivion causing him to moan loadly and to hold onto him tighter. sesshomaru scensing that inuyasha's climax was nearing he pounded into him hared and faster sometimes going deeper and others faster.

    inuyasha screamed sesshomaru's name as he climaxed his juices coating sesshomaru's member then sesshomaru climaxed inside of inuyasha coating his insides mixing with his fluides. wispering inuyasha's name.

    they climb out of the water and lay on the grass the warm steam making a thick warm for keeping in the warmth of the spring. sesshomaru wraps inuyasha in his tale and pulls him close nuzzling his mates neck wispering in his ear. inuyasha burrows closer into sesshomaru's warmth and sesshomaru embraces him holding him close. sesshomaru scans for any demons and finding none he folows his mate into a deep restful sleep.

    that's just my opinion and fantasy

    great story btw

    see ya round

    ja ne
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  • From ANON - inufangirl007 on January 27, 2006
    awwwwwww! very fluffy ending! can't wait to read more! please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Greedluvr321 on January 27, 2006
    That was aaaaaaaaaaaaawesome!! lol! I loved their kiss! Thanxs for the great read, and I hope you continue! L8RZ! (^ O ^)/~
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  • From ANON - Go Elsewhere on January 26, 2006
    Huh.

    Sesshomaru asking for permission.

    Well, that's something new to say the least.

    Anyway, this chapter was well written and I enjoyed it!

    Hope you update again soon!
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  • From ANON - angeluswilliam on January 23, 2006
    I really enjoy this fic so please keep updating it poor Inuyasha.
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