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Reviews for The Prophecy

By : mshutts
  • From arianauchiha23451 on May 21, 2018

    the story is awesome so far as I have read..... please come back and continue with it.... i really need to know what happens next with InuYasha and Sesshoumaru and especially what is planned to happen to Kagome for hurting InuYasha


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  • From shinineko1 on December 08, 2017

    Ah, I'm severely late to the game, but I am sad that this never got finished. :<


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  • From ANON - Madame on March 06, 2016
    Really enjoyed the complexity and detail of this story. You craft a compelling tale. :)
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  • From ANON - Kiochii on October 25, 2015
    I have a burning desire for an update for this story. OMG seriously Kagome has a death wish even in the anime. Anyone who watches can tell that although brash Inuyasha does and says most of the things to protect everyone.
    I adore this story and cant wait to hear what Sesshomaru has planed for Kagome and his reaction to finding out hes going to be a father. ;) Also what the hell is killing things. I ship the eastern lord with a random sexy dude or a adult version of shippo!!!!
    OMG that image I can so imagine Inuyasha getting over protective of his shippo and even Sesshomaru getting unnerved. hehe~
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  • From loveless on June 16, 2015
    What, come on how r u gonna stop if there, lol please update asap n message me when u good I'm still trying to get the hang of how this site works, thx
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 15, 2015
    where r u???? we miss you!
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  • From Calixandria_420 on January 31, 2015
    I really like this story. Please update soon
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  • From ANON - Naomi Flemings on September 23, 2014
    This is an amazing story and I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - calitia on October 15, 2013
    Please put up the rest of the chapter soon!! I've been reading this since the beginning and please continue it!!!!
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  • From ANON - Calitia on September 11, 2013
    OMG please update!! I've been reading since the beginning and I really enjoy your story!!! I must know what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 14, 2013
    Ugh you abbanoned the story just when it was getting good grrr I know this is prob hopeless to ask but please update it I really do enjoy it
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  • From ANON - Inhumanlover on May 01, 2013
    I really like the story line super sad that it has not been updated in years
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  • From ANON - jsinuyasha on April 24, 2013
    I hope you decide to finish this story!
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  • From ANON - Redisroses on September 27, 2012
    Love the story. Want more ASAP.
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  • From ANON - Riuka on September 21, 2012
    Alright I'm gonna be completely honest about the story. I could not get pass chapter thirty for multiple reasons.

    I was already weary of this story from the get-go because it revolved around male pregnancy. Sorry but that type of story isn't my cup of tea. However I was willing to give this story a shot because of the high reviews it received. Perhaps this could sway my perspective a bit on this subject. It almost did if it wasn't for the fact that you drew this story out way too long.

    As I read the story I noticed how much of the story reflects on the previous chapter. In my opinion it's way too much and unnecessary. When it comes to perspective you want to illustrate how one person feels about one event or another. But to do the whole event in another perspective in each chapter it feels like I'm repeatedly reading the same thing twice or three times in a row. It is a painfully slow progression. Dare I say you could have done the whole thing in the authors prospective, save yourself some time, and move on with the plot. This whole story could be reduced to fifteen chapters. From where I stop, I can see six chapters out of it.

    You manage to get Sesshomaru's character down. My issue resides in InuYasha. He is way too docile and meek. I get that you'd want him to be submissive and passive, but he could have at least put up a fight. He took the whole 'I can get pregnant' thing way too easily, and that bothers me. InuYasha would have been more hot headed then that. You could have have him fighting it at first and then residing to his fate instead of having him subjugated right off.

    But here's an idea to play with. I remember how you had a fox lord from the east talk to Sesshomaru. Keep in mind Koga is also from the east. There's something to go with. Unless you don't like Koga that much the scrap it.

    That is all I have to say. All in all, it has potential. It's just way too long and repetitive.

    Peace Out
    ~Riuka
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