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Reviews for Captured freedom

By : sesshomarunaraku
  • From kyokiinsanity on January 16, 2008
    I like it but in the last chapter the (not needed) or whatever was kindof distracting.... I still like it though
    P.S.
    thanks for the review
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  • From ANON - Withering Flame on July 21, 2006
    Frig! grammer...not so good, plot is exquisite, cliff-hangers are acne-prodromal. Damn, hoping to see wat happens next. Update really really soon, plz. Maybe Naraku is going insane. Maybe Sesshy-sama is losin his sense of pride, youkai-dominance and is becomin pathetically....pathetic. Which in reality is quite impossible since Sesshy has a naturally born talent there. Three cheers for Sesshy-sama. oh, and it. is. not. a. tail. Fluffy ain't no tail, me personally, looks more like a pelt than a tail. Pfft! ridiculous. UPDATE!
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  • From ANON - Roni on May 04, 2006
    -.- ...you know you were supposed to erase my comments after I beta your work.
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  • From ANON - littlefiction on February 03, 2006
    nicely done. and yes, I would like to see that, although I am a little confused, I don't understand what part was embarassing.
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  • From ANON - Roni on February 01, 2006
    Very nice ^^. Your writing skills have really started to improve lately. You still have some spelling, grammar, and punctuation problems, but it's really gotten better lately.
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  • From Earendel on January 29, 2006
    Oh wow, Naraku has a conscience.
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  • From ANON - Soniya on January 28, 2006
    guessed now u oh me two chappies get writing
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  • From ANON - soniya on January 28, 2006
    sess wakes up
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  • From ANON - Cain Tatsuhiko on January 27, 2006
    I think Sesshomaru woke up!!! Am I right? Tell me if I am.
    Oh! By the way, great story... so far. Cn't wait to read what happens next!!! ^_~
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  • From ANON - bluedragonstarheart on January 26, 2006
    sess wakes up and goes crazy about everything, tries to kill naraku, and then the cute scene.... or kagura/kanna walks in or inu
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  • From ANON - Crazy Fangirl 0098 Sesshy on January 26, 2006
    Inuyasha interrupted?

    Kagura came in and saw it all?

    They died?

    *Tries to find a good guess*
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  • From ANON - ***** on January 26, 2006
    ...Inuyasha arrives and join them!
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  • From ANON - The mysterious idiot! on January 25, 2006
    Still very COOL!
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  • From ANON - crazy fangirl on January 25, 2006
    Ohmygod! A cliffhanger! Update or I'll hate u for ever and ever!
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  • From ANON - Roni on January 24, 2006
    Allo! Very nice! Just remember that nobody gets over rape quickly. It would take months, at the very least, for someone to get over that kind of trauma. Also, if you intend to put a lemon in this story soon, keep in mind that Sesshomaru will be afraid to do something like that. Aside from a few spelling errors, I like it. It's nothing I can't fix for you! *tear* I must say, I'm honored to have a story dedicated to me. Especially one where our sexy taiyoukai gets himself raped. Poor Sesshy-sama...but I am a sadistiuc person lol.
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