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Reviews for Seven Day Revelation: Days 4-7

By : Kichi
  • From ANON - Inq. Coteaz on June 26, 2006
    zervus,
    i don't see why anyone would flame you like you make it look. at least someone is trying to end this. so far i in personal have no problem with the way you handle the characters. so they are a bit OOC, so what? it's not like this situation was part of the main story, so noone can realy say.
    anyway keep up your work; I like it.

    T
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  • From ANON - Lexi on June 11, 2006
    I love the continuation of the story. I can't wait until u update. Please tell me u are going to continue? Don't listen to the bad reviews this story is a good one. Trust me I have read many and have read worse. Your doing a great job.
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  • From ANON - loulou4729 on May 31, 2006
    Pretty good Kichi. I really like it so far. The only thing I caught was:

    "He began to stoke her faster and she gasped, reaching behind her to massage furry ears that just weren’t there. She froze and the scent of her fear hit him. He tensed and spun her around in his grasp."


    He was still human, so he should not have smelt anything. Maybe you meant to use 'sense' or something like that. But other than that this was excellent. Can't wait to read more :)
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  • From ANON - joy on January 09, 2006
    i like it plz continue
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  • From ANON - Confused on January 08, 2006
    I went and read the first part of this story using the link you listed. It was wonderful and well written and captured the characters beautifully.

    And then I came back here...and saw your poor efforts... *sighs* I won't be reading anymore.

    I'm very upset with what you have done to her story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 08, 2006
    what the hell was that? An author's notes? A rant? Don't post if there's nothing to post. You just piss people off.
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  • From ANON - melanie on January 05, 2006
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - Lynn on January 05, 2006
    Youre such a maenieee! Such a cliffhanger! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Zincpaw on December 29, 2005
    Hi. I read this story when it was posted up on Anime Spiral. Of course it stopped updateing around day 4. One thing that I noticed was that you didn't include the earlier chapters. I remember day 3 was my favourite. I suggest that you post the story from the beginning so any new readers would be able to understand the story from the beginning. However I'm glad you posted this, I really want to see how it has ended. Best of Luck! Zincpaw
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  • From ANON - koo on December 29, 2005
    This falls short of the original story. I am sorry. This is just not good at all.

    This reads like a horny 12 year old wrote it. Please.. .go back and read the first chapters and get a better grip of what it was about. This chapter does not do you or the story justice.
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  • From ANON - howlingblue on December 29, 2005
    oooh, I like this story!

    I can't wait to see how Inu reacts to this news!

    Great job with this chapter!
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  • From ANON - D.j. on December 29, 2005
    I loved it but it need a lot more so herry up with the 2ed chapter
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 29, 2005
    Pareathe is a much better writer. And who is Irin? Did you mean Rin? And why would Sesshomaru talk to Naraku at all? They are enemies. According to Pareathe's notes, the story takes place after Sesshomaru and Inuyasha have semi-settled their differences and are not longer trying to kill each other. You don't seem to have a good grasp of the Inuyasha story.
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  • From ANON - kagome on December 28, 2005
    this is really good please up date
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  • From ANON - ashie on December 28, 2005
    is there going to be any more ??
    i enjoyed reading this
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