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Reviews for Where My Heart Lies

By : Silverbeam
  • From WTW on August 05, 2007
    *whimpers* I'm very new to your creative plot stroy here hun. I have to say that I was captivated and I read from chapter one to 18 all in one setting. I say this in truth and a criticer. I throughly enjoyed the read.

    My only dislike of all of it is that the author is so crule as to harm the readers love of reading with a cliff hanger. XD Oh the agony of it all. X3 lol

    Thank you for writing and sharing your art with every one here. As you are a humble wrighter I know you will continue to do a magnificent job and finish this plot and save this tomented reader as I am. ^^

    I must say that I can tell your a lover of fine books and you've learned well from the authors you've read from. I've enjoyed how you bring a new twist to the story along with the details so that there isn't anything lacking.

    You've done a fine job of slowly explaining everything and introducing new ideas and characters. I wonder however if Naraku will ever play a part since you have managed to bring in all the cast of Inuyash with the exception of Sessy and his own companions who are admist the main character listings as well. Though I trust you Authorship in deciding where things lead.

    I do hope that you don't have a writers block any more and ideas flow freely. I thought I saw a A/N that you mentioned having already writen till chapter 20. My hope is that unlike other authors' stories I've read who make a hasty ending only to finish it for lack of knowing what else to do, you wont end up as such.

    I have very high hopes for your writing in this senario. Please continue.

    Thank you once more and I hope you know that you have a new fan who will be checking up on this story often in hopes for new chapters. =3

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  • From Patty530 on August 04, 2007
    OH WOW! That chapter had a lot of "the hell" moments in it. Like: How the hell is Kagome going to get out of this?, Where the hell is Inuyasha?, What the hell is Master's problem? Loved it, but may I be so bold as to ask; Is there going to be a happy ending?

    Luv;

    Patty
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  • From Patty530 on July 22, 2007
    Wonderful as always. Love this story. Keep up the good work. Update when you can.

    Luv;
    Patty
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  • From LadyCash on July 22, 2007
    Great chapter!
    Love the strength Kagome is developing.
    I think she's going to need it, I feel angst coming!
    Well, more than lately. Bring it on!
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  • From hatsumichan on July 16, 2007
    Excellent story - you are a wonderful writer. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From Patty530 on July 05, 2007
    Thank you for updating. It's a wonderful story, and I'm really enjoying it. Please update again soon. Thanks

    Patty
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  • From ANON - oniguts on July 05, 2007
    I am so pissed off at Inuyasha but I also feel sad for him. He truly does not know how to love someone. When will he see that it was Kikyo who betrayed him and chosse to die. He always forgets that she was the one who pinned him to the tree. Kagome going off withou him made me so proud of her. I'm glad she decided to think of her well being for once instead of Inuyasha's. I hope she can prove that she really is a strong person on her own, should she ever have to fight her new enemy.
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  • From Patty530 on June 01, 2007
    Hi again. I just had to write and let you know that I understand your "fear" of writing a story that was not one long lemon. My story too is romance, the lemon in it is in the right context, not just sex for sex's sake. I was happily suprised when it was pretty well recieved. Just letting you know that I for one appreciate the romance aspect of your story. Keep up the good work.
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  • From Patty530 on May 31, 2007
    Loved every minute of it. Please update soon.
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  • From Sieg on May 26, 2007
    Well to say the truth it was good. but down to what matters is seeing in ur different chapters u statreed to change ur writeing style. dont know why that would be. second I dont think InuYasha could ever seem so weak. I like were u are going with Sango and Mirouki. But i dont know if i missed it or not was this after Naroku death. But over all i love the story keep it up.
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  • From ANON - adeaneri on April 23, 2007
    OMG i love this story please update soon
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  • From apollyonangel on October 29, 2006
    I half to say I love the direction you are going with the story. An also the face that after Kagomes life changes so dramatically, she dosn't just except it. I have read so many stories like that. (Point in case: Kagome turn into a demon, "Well I good with it." Smiles all around story moves one to something else.) I like seeing that is not easy for her to deal with, not that I like to see other people in misery or any thing but, things happen you cant control. WEll any way I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - angelevie (not logged in) on August 28, 2006
    I loved this story. It's very original. I hope you're able to update again soon!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 06, 2006
    I like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 30, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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