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By : Titaness
  • From bloodshound on November 13, 2011
    brilliant. absolutely brilliant. cue helpless laughter. ^^
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  • From Trelweny on November 13, 2010
    Very fun story so far. Though it doesn't seem to fit with the Inu no Taisho having fathered Inuyasha having his spirit torture Sesshomaru has been entertaining.

    I absolutely loved Sesshomaru's last line in this chapter.

    Thanks for writing!
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  • From bluemoonvixen on April 17, 2007
    I can't wait for the new chapters; I absolutely love this story! Good luck with your Sociology too. ^.^ If I come up with any suggestions, I'll be sure to post up another review.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 02, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From mrskgoodman on January 31, 2007
    I think this is my fav chapter of the entire story. Kagome pissed is hilarious.
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  • From Reymond on January 29, 2007
    Waw !!!!!!!! Your humor is absolutely delightful. Nothing else to say : I love this story. Thank you very much !!! (Questions : how old are Rin and her "boyfriend" ? Will Sesshomaru think about how Rin's feeling in her gut and heart and how himself was feeling with Kagome before kissing her ?)

    A french mother and reader,
    Merci beaucoup,

    Merely Truth
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  • From bluemoonvixen on January 29, 2007
    Woot! Can't wait to see the next chapter. Please update as soon as possible!
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  • From Ume on January 28, 2007
    Wow. I must say that I truely enjoy this story. I absolutely adore how you are able to have two perspectives on the same situation. It makes the story more complete and real. Someone once said that the best stories draw you in and have the stories unfold around the reader. One way to do this is to describe one things at least three differnent ways...but that is hard to do and a bit tedious. You have managed to do the same thing by using a technique that I haven't seen often done. You play out the situation twice with different perspectives inhancing the reader's experience. I admire your determination to do such a thing. I would most likely been unable to do such a thing. (too troublesome for me...yes I am lazy). This story is well thought out and well written. I await your next installment.
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on January 06, 2007
    Ah, I re-read that last chapter and looked at my review. It didn’t do it justice. Erm, my brain has been on the fritz for awhile now. Hehe.

    I just had to tell you that I found these things very funny:

    [ “See you guys tomorrow. And, Inuyasha…Why don’t you just SIT there and be comfortable? I mean, by SITTING there you can relax, maybe even take a nap. And, a nice SIT would do you wonders, don’t you think so? Because SITTING, I mean, a good SIT, would do you a world of good. So SIT SIT SIT SIT SIT SIT SIT and be merry, okay?” she asked, smiling perkily at the groaning, prone Inuyasha, turning around with a flick of her hair and flouncing away into the dark night.


    But what, exactly, did he suck?

    Because pink turned Jaken an even more unappealing shade of sickly green, reminiscent of the entrails of a rancid pile of fish.
    Or Keichi...


    as his blasted father could not have possibly ascended at death.
    ‘This is entirely your fault, you feckless…’

    The gleeful cackle that suddenly resonated through his brain had him gritting his teeth.


    “Um…Rin…Rin…Lord Sesshomaru? How do you know when you love someone?” she mumbled.

    Sesshomaru stood stock-still, eyes wide in total, inescapable terror.


    Sesshomaru dimly considered slicing off his own ears, scratching out his own eyes and hiding somewhere where he would not have to hear this…he had always considered the moon a beautiful place.


    “I am fine. I will need some time to answer, Rin. Don’t concern yourself overmuch.” He said coolly, full-blown panic causing him to stall spectacularly.]


    I love how Rin goes from telling Sesshoumaru all about what had happened with her and then abruptly changes the topic to Sesshoumaru’s welfare. That was very amusing.

    Ah, ‘prevaricated’. Always have loved that word

    This gave me a contented smile:

    [esshomaru watched her go, bemused, then cast one last glance at his half-sibling, before following dutifully, resolved to protect any hapless being stupid, or unlucky, enough to get into Kagome’s way.

    She was obviously on the warpath.

    For some reason, that brought a delighted smile to Sesshomaru’s lips.]


    Re-reading this gave me some ideas that I'll send your way. ^_^

    Snow
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  • From ANON - Mari-chan on December 30, 2006
    *whimpers* I wanted so much to see more of this fic, it's driving me insane with not knowing what happens with Inuyasha whenever Kagome gets to do well... whatever it is that she's going to do! And Sesshomaru-sama is FINALLY getting to know his feelings for the miko... it makes me so happy... domo arigato for writting this and I can't wait to see it being updated!!^^
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  • From ANON - PURPLE PIXIE on November 30, 2006
    LOVE YOU UPDATE SOON PLEASE HAVE KAGOMAE KICK INU'S ASS ALL OVER JAPAN KIKOU HATERS RULE
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  • From ANON - Dee Nekura on November 30, 2006
    Ok, Sesshy's reaction to Rin's crush was priceless and perfect. I love the story so far, update soon if you can! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on November 30, 2006
    Erm, I can't figure out this sentence:

    "As she stormed off, Sesshomaru followed quietly, glaring murderously at the odd youkai appearing at her bright pink holy aura and obvious power."

    There was another one that needed restructuring, but that was the only one that I couldn't wrap around my mind. ^_^ Maybe it's just late, or the med dosage increase. LOL

    Snow
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on November 30, 2006
    WooHoo! You updated! That was a very interesting chapter. Rin was just sooo cute. And OMG, what the hell is that agreement that InuTaisho made with the Eastern Lord. Maybe Sesshoumaru should just kill the old bastard. Oh gosh! Sesshoumaru's reaction to Rin's question was absolutely hilarious. I'm still grinning. Glad Keichi is still alive and suffering. Heheh. Can't wait to see Kagome's reaction to seeing the clay pot and the idiot. Sesshoumaru's reaction was amusing. Hm, am I missing anything? Probably. That was a really full chapter and well done. Thanks bunches for sticking around and continuing the fic. I lurve you!

    Geeze, you didn't have to give me all that credit. *blush* I'm just a piniata full of plot bunnies. Eh, glad to make you so happy. ^_^ Let me know if you need any help. I'd be happy to oblige. ^_^

    Great chappie and I anxiously await the next!

    Snow
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  • From ANON - BlueMoonVixen on November 30, 2006
    Loved this chapter and can't wait to read what happens next. Poor Sesshomaru though, lol. With the whole Rin concept, it had me laughin'.
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