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By : agarza
  • From Starryice on June 20, 2019

    I LOVED this story; it was AMAZING!!


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  • From Ruuka on June 17, 2008
    oh my, woow.
    this is such a heartbreaking story.
    It is very heartfelt, and shows how Sesshu and Rin really connect. And shows how he can't leave her,
    and admits his feelings.
    You are a great writer and i hope you can wite many more. i look forward to reading them.
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  • From SesshysOneTrueMateBubblez on March 28, 2008
    i like, its very deep
    i hope you dont stop writing your stories
    can you keep me updated if you write more cause i read most of yours but i like this one the best *so far*
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 02, 2007
    Ameril 2007-09-02 id # 3000059670
    You know, I really loved this story. It was really fulfilling, it carried out nicely to the end. I liked the dove demon what whas her name again? Azaaki? I could picture how pretty she was but honestly, the moment I read she was coming to the western lands I immediately despised her and wanted for her to die- to keel over and look what happened, Rin poisoned her! At the time I was laughing maniacally when she dropped down, I mean I like her but then she was going to take Sesshomaru away from Rin, and that majorly pissed me off. But anyway about this beautiful story... it was nicely detailed (which I liked) and worded, so I didn't lose interest after reading the first two paragraphs. I liked this kind of story theme and I encourage more like this! Great job overall!! Keep up the good work! *Grins*


    -Ameril


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  • From ANON - leyren on July 25, 2006
    The story of the tension of their desires. Sesshomarus conflict of his emotions and Rin's love that to me is pure, all of these elements you've added made this story absolutely one of me favorites. I am grateful for a writer like you.
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  • From ANON - Ana on July 11, 2006
    Loved it. I've never read a fic about rin murdering anyone before. And Sesshoumaru has an interesting personality in this fic.
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  • From ANON - Imae (not signed in) on July 08, 2006
    What? Did you read the story, or look through it?

    : in response to NateDog :
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  • From ANON - Natedog on July 08, 2006
    Are you trying to say the girl is a whore?
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 26, 2006
    Why wasn't Azakii just revived by the sword? She could have just been let go after she was brought back to life.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 21, 2006
    I find myself liking and not liking this story for some reason. I love the story behind it, and I love the POV and the short sentences, but I feel like something is missing that would make this a really good fic. I feel some of the dialogue is a bit strained in the situation, and the plot seems to move from a hot love scene to a marriage to another to quickly.

    I think with some fleshing out and maybe a good beta, this would be a fantastic fic. There is great potential here, keep up the writing!
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  • From ANON - KokoroOfAnime on June 19, 2006
    OMG.... I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS FIC IS AWESOME AND ANGSTY AND JUST... WOW. (wipes forehead) i got it out. this is a really great fic... but my question is... is it over?

    -KokoroOfAnime (you can find me on FF.net)
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  • From ANON - DaughterofBast on June 16, 2006
    Nice. * grins* Very nice. I enjoyed that, the lemons especially. But you also have a good grasp of poor Fluffy-sama's dillema; I admire that. You have talent.
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  • From ANON - dream_queen on June 02, 2006
    OMG! that was heart breaking and good...*sobs*....rin and sesshomaru-sama FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on May 28, 2006
    This is really good....I just could not stop reading it.....GOOD JOB!!!
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  • From ANON - Mmoirai on May 21, 2006
    This is very well done. I enjoyed the intensity very much and loved that it was written in Sesshoumaru's POV. Very, very well done. Rin murdering the demoness was unexpected, but I suppose growing up with a cold ruthless demon lord is bound to teach Rin 'Survival is for the strong' and 'You must take what you want, and not wait for it to be handed to you or taken from you.' I give you two thumbs up!
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