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Reviews for My Brother's Keeper

By : KogasAngel
  • From ANON - Pamela on December 06, 2015
    This story is great! Do hope you finish it. I would love to see how the rivalry turns out. It seems like she has truly captivated both men.
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  • From INUNOOKAMILOVER on January 22, 2015
    AWESOME! Waiting for more chapters! Pleeeeeeaaassseee! :D
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  • From NaughtyAngel on January 13, 2014
    I liked this story & thought it had a great deal of potential. I was quite sorry to see that the author seems to have just given up on the story.
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  • From ANON - Boocat on May 19, 2013
    I have really enjoyed the stories you have written, this one included. I hope you post more on this story soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 12, 2012
    PLEASE UPDATE! The end of the chapter was definitely a cliff hanger lol. I would love to know what happens next :)
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  • From LadySesshomaru on July 03, 2010
    omg....PLEASE!!!!! YOU MUST DO MORE..........PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.....email me at valiente16@yahoo.com if you update....
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  • From EzriCandy on September 08, 2009
    Yaaaaay!!!

    I saw the other day that you had updated one of your Inuyasha stories and I was even more ecstatic to see that it was this one! I'm so glad that you've gotten your mojo back for writing. I'm also very happy to hear that you'll still be working on your Naruto fics because I have to say that I'm quite addicted to those as well, lol.

    Now for the newest chapter...

    Even though Youko hasn't done anything wrong, I wish he had, because that would give me a reason to hate him. I know this is a Sesshoumaru x Kagome, but he's in the way! Lol! I'm still kinda leary as to if he's really going to hurt Kagome by cheating on her, or if their relationship just ends.

    The kiss between Kagome and Sesshoumaru...it was so sweet even though it was in a public place. He didn't have to have a reason to do, he just did it and that totally did it for me.

    There is tons of other things I could say, but I'll stop here.

    I'll be eagerly awaiting the update for this...or any of your fics! :-D
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  • From ANON - evilpinatag on September 08, 2009
    Oh wow, this is a great story! I just finished the chapters you have up so far. the idea of the weight loss was great and kind of sad. Update again soon!
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  • From PhoenixWolf on September 07, 2009
    YIPPIE!!!!! *doing happy dance*

    I have been waiting forever (it seems) for you to update this story! Don't get me wrong, I absolutely adore your other IY stories, but for some reason THIS ONE has held my attention since I began reading it a year or so ago.

    I am very happy (incase you didn't notice earlier)that you have updated this story, and I am looking forward to your return to your IY stories, and seeing what you will create/write for us next!

    Until we meet again ........ (soon I hope) *wink*
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  • From sysclp on September 06, 2009
    I am so glad to see you back and hope you get to update your other IY stories soon as well. Thanks!
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  • From Fourshotchild on September 06, 2009
    I really like your story. It's pretty over the top but in a good way! I like how Kagomehas transformed from an ugly duckling to a swam. I'm curious to see how her love interests will turn out. I figure that since this story is under Kagome/Sesshomaru that he'll be the victor, but you've caught my attention. I hope you continue this story! I look forward to more chapters. Good luck!
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  • From ConsistentlyInconsistent on July 07, 2009
    I love this story! I really hope you continue with it. I know very well what it's like to live with friends/family who are part of a frat/sorority and you're not. It can be...interesting haha =] I really like the way the character relationships are developing and how the characters themselves are changing with each new encounter with Kagome and her roommates. The guys of YYH, IY, and FY would make the most scrum-diddly-umptions fraternity in the history of...ever and everything! I really hope to see something new soon. Keep up the great work!
    --CI
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  • From atlanteangoddess on February 09, 2009
    any more?
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  • From loretta537 on September 18, 2008
    this is interesting so far. youko seems to have a genuine interest in kagome but sessy doesnt, i wonder how she'll feel later on. i like the way you wrote about how everyone treated her differently when she lost weight and the fact that the reasons people can be heavy dont have to be because they eat alot or even the wrong kinds of food. both sides of my family have sever obesity problems and out of me and my two sisters only my youngest sister isnt overweight but she's borderline anorexic. it's amazing to see how people treat you differently when you're overweight and sad to say that if you're an overweight child people are mad at the parents but once you hit highschool it's all your fault. i had a single working mother who would buy us a doughnut on the way to the sitters at 5am and either buy fast food or make junk like hamburger helper for dinner, but what can you expect when she worked 12hrs a day. growing up we never had fresh vegies only canned peas, corn, and green beans. and it has been hard learning to like and eat different vegies and i still dont do a good job of eating them. kagome is lucky in your story, she has someone who cares enough about her to help her not only learn to eat right and exercise but also offer emotional and financial support, not to mention the fact she's only 60 pounds overweight. i wonder what the story would be like if she was like me and weighed around 300 pounds in high school and didnt have the money to go to college. something most people dont understand is it's very hard to exercise when you're overweight, if you dont belive me then try strapping 200 pounds of weights to your stomach and go through your normal day to see what it's like.
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  • From bloodyblond on June 13, 2008
    Well as the norm with all of your stories, I love this one. Kinda.... I'm not to gung-ho about Kagome snuggling up to Sesshomaru even though he was never nice to her in the past. Yes, I know you stated he never went out of his way to be mean to her either, it all just seems... I dunno sudden. But that's just me, i still like the story regardless and look forward to an update.
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