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Reviews for The Call

By : SilenceoftheHeart
  • From ANON - Naomi Flemings on September 25, 2014
    This is a really good story, but I would love to find out what Sesshomaru thinks of Inuyasha when they have these meetings.
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  • From loretta537 on May 22, 2008
    this is a good story, could you write more?
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 13, 2007
    I really liked this.
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  • From Mort on October 20, 2007
    Very enjoyable- I'm looking forward to reading more of yur work-
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  • From LiquidFire89 on June 28, 2007
    Oh wow...that was actually, really really good...*gulps* I'm nervous about how I'm gonna work through my story now, LoL...*gives two thumbs up*
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 31, 2006
    wonderful
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on August 07, 2006
    This was an incredibly beautiful one-shot. The lover's previous conflict sets the stage for the seeming coldness of the encounter and yet you managed to make it passionate. What appears to be tender behavior at the end was a pleasant surprise and gives a twist that leaves the reader satisfied that they have just read a fic that actually has meaning. This is actually a perfect setup for an approach/avoidance fic should you decide to continue on with a larger plot. I'm sure that I speak for many readers when I say that your style, flow, and depth would always bring me back for more. You can be certain that you have the ability should you consider making the attempt. Personally, I look forward to reading any future fics that you author.

    Thanks for the beautiful review on Torn. I had never thought about the story the way that you described it. I was hoping to convey that our actions are not always good or evil, but done out of what we feel will help another, although there is usually some selfish motivation involved. Perhaps I succeeded in making the characters more three dimensional. Again, thanks for such an introspective review of Torn.

    Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on July 20, 2006
    That was certainly different. In a good way, of course. It was sort of strange to hear almost nothing from Sesshoumaru, but that also added to the story's appeal.
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  • From ANON - Iyasu on July 14, 2006
    Not bad, not bad at all. I see no problems with it. Poor Inuyasha though, just getting used and then thrown away. Except for tonight, but I wonder seriously, why did Sesshomaru come to him? Could you write one that focuses more on his point of view to answer those questions?
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  • From ANON - Catchfire on July 13, 2006
    So is this a one shot deal. Or will you write more chapters. Because I really think that this could be turned from a pwp into a developing love story. And it's also set for for my favorite kind of developing love story. The kind where the characters have sex right from the beginning and all through the story. From the way this fic ended it looked like Sesshoumaru was finally starting to feel something for Inuyasha or to at least finally start to show that he feels something for Inuyasha. There's a whole world of possibilities in which this story could follow and all coming up with very different fics depending upon which way you choose to go. Like this Inuyasha expects Sesshoumaru to be gone in the morning what if he was wrong what if Sesshoumaru were still there when he woke up. Preferably still holding him but he could be nearby too. What if the reason that Sesshoumaru has for still being there is that he's realized just how much Inuyasha means to him. Only because he's Sesshoumaru he won't admit that to Inuyasha but instead simply tells Inuyasha that he will be traveling with him and his group for the time being. What if Inuyasha were stunned at the news but is unable to denie his mate just about anything. So he agrees. And What if Sesshoumaru doesn't want to keep the secret of Inuyasha being mated to him. And let's say (once the group gets over it's shock about them being mates) Sesshoumaru wants to make it very clear that Inuyasha is his. So he does little stuff like grabbing him and kissing him whenever he wants to and when they sit down to dinner he pulls Inuyasha into his lap, and at night he either pulls Inuyasha into his lap to sleep or he pulls Inuyasha down beside him. Let's also say that Sesshoumaru used his tail to wrap around Inuyasha both to keep him warm and to keep him in place. (I don't think anybody knows what that furry thing is but I prefer it being a tail. Because than he can use his tail to tease or control Inuyasha. Anyway I hope you continue this fic I really loved it and would love to see it continued with or without my Ideas/suggestions. Although I would love to see them used I gave them as an example on one or so of the ways this fic could be continued. If you do continue it don't get discouraged by only a few reviewers at first it takes time to gather a following and become known to people. The more you post and the more chapters you have the more likely it is that people will see your fic. But don't think that I'm saying do extremely short chapters because that is really irratating. They don't have to be really long just not really really short unless you have a specific reason for doing a short one. Anyway (didn't I already say that) Great story. Keep up the good work. You may want to consider using a beta if you are going to write a fairly long story. Although you did really good with this one. Unless I missed something at the top saying it was beta'd by so and so. In which case sorry for suggesting the beta. It's not that I think you need one so much as having somebody else go over the story and suggest things is a pretty good idea. They tend to catch things you the author would miss.
    Sincerely Catchfire
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  • From ANON - ? on July 02, 2006
    you said you finished it? is his oging to be the only chapter
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  • From ANON - Closet kitten on July 01, 2006
    No, you didn't miss the mark, in fact you nialed it. For a one shot, that was probably one of the best that I have read with this pairing. I'm glad that you didn't make Sesshoumaru all OCC like people usaly try to do when confronted with writing for thsi pairing and I think that yo did an exelent job worthy of praise.
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  • From ANON - Sekre on July 01, 2006
    Great job!!! The lemon was well written and the story very believable. Couldn't help but feel sad for Inuyasha though - I'm sure that was the intent ^^ Anyway, loved it!
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  • From ANON - Lady Aqualyne (Too Tired to Sign In) on July 01, 2006
    I just wanted to write you and say that this was a very wonderfully written story. I felt so much through it, and the sex scene was absolutely amazing. I do so hope you decide to write a sequel to this.
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  • From ANON - Stefanie on June 30, 2006
    For a first time lemon you did a wonderful job. I did feel sorry for Inuyasha though, Sesshomaru didn't have to be that rough. It would be really interesting to see what motivated Sesshomaru into marking Inuyasha in the first place and why he keeps coming back, since he supposedly hates Inuyasha. I hope to be seeing more of your work sometime soon. ^_^
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