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Reviews for Untitled (Please send ideas for a title!!!)

By : Animefangirl81
  • From Darknessdawns on May 25, 2008
    I love this story. it has a really good Idea behind it. maybe you could just call it trapped or something or think of where the story is going and name it after some thing that happens later but wilol confuse the hell out of every one. Good luck though.
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  • From flamingangel on February 24, 2007
    Hey, I like the story so far!
    One suggestion at the moment is this: You tend to hit enter (or something) that spaces it out... in mid sentence?! It would be a little easier to read if you fixed those up so it didn't go all over the place, but it isn't too distracting. As for grammer and stuff, it's great, keep it up :)
    Sorry to be a nazi, I don't want you to take that a bad way, because it's not meant to be... I hope you think of that as "constructive critisism" and not a negative review, because I love your story!
    I can't wait to read some more!
    Ah, and a title, hmm.. I had a similar problem titling mine, but thanks to a mix of about 5 different ideas, I got one I was happy with, all on my own :)
    I would suggest something that fits nicely and seems to summarize the story in a few words, like, if the drought is a big thing in this story (the actual lack of rain, as well as their romantic drought, unless that's coming up quick) you could simply title it "The Drought," and if the starvation is another big factor, well, "Drought and Starvation" could cover what's happening to everyone, and also cover the underlying theme of the lack of Inuyasha and Kagome's love life... something, blah, my mind isn't completely working.
    As someone said to me when mine was untitled, people don't really like to read Untitled pieces, so you should think of something soon.
    I like it, update soon :)
    ~*Angel*~
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  • From ANON - Woof on August 27, 2006
    Good start keep writing
    Title: Oh Well!
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  • From ANON - soulessfayt on August 21, 2006
    wow this is great please update do you have this o any other fanfic site
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  • From ANON - who_do_you_do on August 07, 2006
    I like how this story starts and I how to read more. I don't know what is the whole just yet, but if it has to do with opening up the well maybe you can call it something like - A way home.
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  • From XxSangoxX on August 07, 2006
    dear you should really write more to this.

    I like.
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