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Reviews for This Burning

By : khryssie
  • From ANON - syndey on May 21, 2015
    Next chapter pleaz I love this story
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  • From ANON - sma_orlando on December 23, 2014
    Please finish this really good story.
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  • From ANON - guest on October 05, 2014
    i really want you to finish this story it is sooooooo good and you stopped at the climax!!
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  • From Poisonedlips on August 22, 2007
    Well I love it so far! You must update soon. I would love it if you would e-mail me when you update. e-mail dueljewel18@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - seto'swifey on October 20, 2006
    Poor Inuyasha...that ass kicking that Sesshomaru is going to give him is going to him alittle more than it's going to hurt me reading about it.
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  • From ANON - Passing Reader on August 31, 2006
    Awsome, you've totally captivated me with just the 1st 2 chapters!!!! XD
    I cant wait to see what happends next!!!! Please update soon ne? ^-^
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 23, 2006
    ooooohh love it pleas write more!
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  • From ANON - acr on August 19, 2006
    Good chapter. Though I was hoping the youkai courting would be a bit more involved. Also, I kind of like Sess's mom. she's interesting. though I could do w/out the author notes mid-chapter.
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  • From ANON - Sherry on August 18, 2006
    luved it! i like the fact that sessh's mom is a perv! too funny! i would suggest getting a beta tho, its a little hard to read sometimes. but seriosly its still really good! cant wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - CrimsonInHumanBloodForever- Too lazy to log in on August 18, 2006
    ^^ Copy n paste them from word XD haha ^^ I'll try to read some some more soon
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  • From ANON - acr on August 15, 2006
    Wow...really different start. I hope that Inuyasha doesn't go quietly. I like mate fics where things don't go too smoothly.
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  • From GrayWolf on August 15, 2006
    this could be more spaced out. it gives me a headach look at it. but i do want to read it. it looks really good.
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  • From ANON - gothfirefaerie on August 15, 2006
    Do you have a beta? I love the story premise, and the writing it's self is fairly sound. But if you want help with baisic typos, gramar, spelling and an overall plot check, you should have someone beta read chapters for you before you post them. I have done Beta work before, and can probably recomend some other beta's if you want. Very nicely done and I look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Rocky (2 lazy 2 log in) on August 14, 2006
    i reallly lik where this is going!! =3 i would luv seeing more of ur story in the near future!! hope u continue because i luv ur plot!! very original!! =3

    Ur-Gay-Luvr
    Rocky
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  • From ANON - Sherry on August 14, 2006
    you have my attention now! continue on! great job love the idea of sessh's mom getting them together! ahaha! great! update now!
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