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Reviews for Let's Dance

By : PhoenixWolf
  • From madmiko on July 20, 2007
    Hee hee! Now that is a cute songfic. It was cute and funny. And you really surprised me by putting InuYasha with Sango. That's usually a pairing I detest, but it was so cute in this. He was trying to be such a player, but actually did turn out to be surprising smooth. And Miroku! LOL!! "Is my hair good? Did I get all the drool?" Hilarious! And at the first club, no one got anyone else's name! Ha! They all sounded kind of young and silly. Then at the second club, Sess and Inu claimed to smell the girls, and Miroku told them, "When you two do that, it kinda creeps me out." That was priceless! This really was a fun read. Thanks for sharing!
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  • From SerenityRose on April 22, 2007
    You should most deffinitly make another chapter! I want to know what happens when they go for coffee and if anything else happens! PWEASE!? *puppy dog eyes*
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  • From ANON - Kero on September 04, 2006
    *Laughs Hysterically* Oh My God this has to be one of the funnies things I have ever had the pleasure of reading! And I have read so many stories I am surprised I remember that this is one of the best ones I have read. But it is!

    “Let’s go to that new club that was built a few blocks from here. I hear that it is really fly.”

    Oh My God, this was one of my favorite lines. This is meant as a compliment of some sort. I don’t really know if you meant it to sound like a parent trying to ‘communicate’ with their children. I don’t know, maybe that wasn’t the case and I have just insulted you. I am sorry if I have!

    It was just something I had to point out. It was funny and I loved it I will remember this for a long time.

    “Are we here to bicker about the finer points of territorial rights, or are we here to find some territory?”

    This line I felt very, very good about. It was well created and I thought it got the point across. Very well executed and thought out. I loved it when Miroku was panicking about if his hair looked good. One of the biggest plus’s for me was the fact that Sesshoumaru and InuYasha and on good terms with each other.

    I have one question though.

    Why in the world would you pair Kagura with Miroku, and Sango with InuYasha? I was really blown away by that. Seriously, I was expecting Kikyo not Kagura. That was one of the biggest twists of the story. And to tell you the truth, I loved it. The freshness and you were clearly thinking outside the box.

    Ok so as I got to the end I read the author thingy.

    You can’t finish the story there. This was so good, *growls* you can’t this has the potential to become so much more than you have created. I want to know what happens. The plot really shouldn’t stop there; there was no drama and no betrayal or anything of that sort.

    *Sigh* I don’t know it is your story. But, I would gladly read more by you. Also, your other story was great as well. Well if you decide to continue on with this story I will be behind you one hundred percent and waiting for the next chapter.

    Bi

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  • From ANON - SessandKagFan on August 22, 2006
    CONTINUE...................uh uh uh uh .PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PlZ.
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  • From ANON - raven28 on August 20, 2006
    its good but please keep it going

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