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Reviews for The Demon's Promise

By : gumdropz
  • From ANON - Faerie Demoness on September 01, 2006
    Hell no don't stop, I wish I could write this stuff like you do. Fucking awesome! No pun intended. I can't wait to see what you cook up next.
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  • From ANON - Jay FicLover on August 31, 2006
    Now that I think about it, you could also put some flashbacks explaining why Naraku ever feared that his "damn father" would keep him away from Kagome, or if the reason Kagome and her mother weren't geting along at the end had something to do with Naraku... did any of them suspect of Naraku's hidden intentions towards Kagome? May be right before they died they were considering sending one of the two away to keep Naraku from temptation? May be Naraku knew about that and that's why he hugged Kagome so tightly when she asked what was going to happen to her, whether she was goona be sent away or he would abandon her on her own or something? I'm very curious as to whether their parents could sense what was happening, whether they could feel the attraction between the two: acknowledged and turned aware in Naraku's case, oblivious and unconscious in Kagome's.
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  • From ANON - Jay FicLover on August 30, 2006
    Yes but the plot you add can make the lemons all the more interesting... Have one of Kagome's distant aunts or uncles come visit and they do it right there with the uncle/aunt right in the very same house... all the time knowing that if they're discovered the uncle/aunt will press charges and fight Naraku for the custody of Kagome...

    You can also have some teenager boy from Kagome's school be inlove with her and get her permission to come over for a study session, but hitting on Kagome more than actual studying, making Naraku furious with jealousy and decide to have Kagome home-schooled with a 'female' tutor instead of her attending high school were lustful boys could make a pass on HIS Kagome... but then he finds out that he can't get her out of school without her aunt/uncle getting more suspicious and watching him like a hawk.
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  • From ANON - Jasmine on August 30, 2006
    All of the storys are good when is the next ones coming out? I hope soon :)
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  • From ANON - SilverMoon on August 29, 2006
    damn. there's just something sexy about fucking you're own brother/sister. not that i do it though... i've been waiting for a story kinda like this. and damn, you're one helluva writer! awesome work and waiting for the next chapter *wink*
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  • From ANON - Kags21 on August 28, 2006
    damn those are some good scenes, I guess they can talk . lol
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  • From ANON - Kags21 on August 28, 2006
    That was one very goood lemon, wow. hot
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  • From ANON - Kags21 on August 28, 2006
    Yes!, another Naraku /Kagome fic i love it so far
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