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By : SilenceoftheHeart
  • From Pumpkinpi on May 10, 2009
    Boiling hot Oneshot!!!
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on June 24, 2008
    Wow that was just really hot
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  • From BlackberryPatch on June 14, 2007
    Mmmm.... that was very nice and wonderfully HOT. Thanks, I enjoyed that. =]
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  • From ANON - Larien Miriel on February 17, 2007
    meep! that was a good one! write moar! ^^'
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  • From ANON - alphonseonaleash on February 01, 2007
    yah, i was wondering why sessh was jacking off myself....but hey, he got the ignorant little puppy, so who cares, nee?
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  • From ANON - gen on January 11, 2007
    goodness! i was re-reading this and suddenly it clicked, you're the Silence in Snow's livejournal.

    hello! i liked your pwp.... and i liked the way you ended this fic,
    maybe next time.... it leaves the door open to some other fic
    (that maybe you are already working on?), at the same time,
    no explanations need to be said (excellent evasion on a issue!)

    when i first read this, i didnt think i could review if i wasnt logged in...
    i think i have an id for this site, but i dont remember. =P

    i'll check out your other fics, if they are here in this section.
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  • From ANON - Shadowwolf on December 10, 2006
    Why would Sess be jacking off in the woods... mating season is nearing? Inuyasha is soon approaching his first season and like draws to like species wise anyway. Interesting.
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  • From Firesword on November 09, 2006
    This was really great. Almost panted, but that would be just too embarrassing. Lol. How about A Second Time?

    Incredible writing. Very descriptive.
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  • From ANON - Merely Truth on October 16, 2006
    Very nice first time for Inuyasha, and very nice description you did, I liked it. These two are also my favorite pairing, such fascinating characters !!! AAAhhh, thank you Rumiko for them, and big thank you you, the writer, for the wonderful stories with them ! May I ask for a sequel with a new meeting, please ?

    Frome a french mother and faithful reader of AFF,
    Beaucoup de baisers de la France !

    Merely Truth
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  • From ANON - cattus on October 02, 2006
    wow! do good! write more in the same style!
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  • From ANON - Beca on September 21, 2006
    Wow, that was hot, like, uber well done. Sess' dialogue was very believable. And to be honest, I don't care why he was doing what he was doing it made for an awesome fic.
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  • From ANON - Hinder on September 15, 2006
    this was a damn hot story...I love how you have InuYasha insecure and still a virgin and SesshoMaru acting nice, yet...also himself...:D I love the personalities you gave them, different from the anime, yet exactly like the anime...if that makes sense :P Make a second chapter? ::puppy dog eyes:: Pwease?
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on September 13, 2006
    The scene with Sesshoumaru on his back, teasing his own body, was very erotic. Inuyasha’s reactions were quite amusing. It gives the impression that he is truly innocent.

    This was quite amusing: “the hanyou wasn’t exactly sure if Sesshoumaru was born naked, with fur, or--as he sometimes suspected--in full battle gear.” Humor, injected correctly, can provide fresh air in areas that are thick with passion, anger, angst, etc. I’m impressed.

    “I find myself in need of company,” That line was incredibly elegant, exactly the manner in which I would expect Sesshoumaru to address a young, innocent adult. We all know that he is a bit less formal with Rin and sometimes with Inuyasha. But with this one phrase, you have managed to make his formality gentle. Beautiful.

    “I ask you to stay,” the youkai continued, “but I won’t force you.” This line gives the impression of contentment in whatever circumstance that Sesshoumaru is left to endure. It was also a way to communicate to us that he doesn’t intend to be threatening in any way. A wonderful change from the norm.

    Oh, the seduction! Sesshoumaru is being so gentle. It’s truly amazing. The painstaking detail in your description makes it so real; as though it is a movie playing in the mind. That is the best compliment that I believe that I will ever give an author. You’ve done it.

    Gah! I’m melting in my chair! Someone bring a firehose!

    The ending was great. “Perhaps another time,”. An answer to both the question of whether or not Sesshoumaru was going to try to kill him again or have sex with him again was just great because it wasn’t an answer at all. I know that there is a word for it, but it is late and my brain is mush. Ambiguous?

    Wonderful fic! And another one that could have another little interlude tacked on. You do it so well; otherwise, I wouldn’t bother mentioning that. There doesn’t even need to be a precursor. Just a thought.

    Snow

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  • From ANON - pb,m on September 09, 2006
    your story was pretty sexy i liked it u shud write a contiousation-cant spell)...any wayz wow! o-0
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  • From GrayWolf on September 07, 2006
    Wow!!! that is some fucking awesome shit! I love it to death! I'd like to see like a longer story with more chapters with a Sess/inu pair :D that would be so hot!
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