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Reviews for Coming Together

By : sunshyne
  • From kookookitty on July 19, 2007
    i beta for a few authors.

    my usual beta proposal:

    when i edit i look for spelling, punctuation, word usage, tense consistency, and flow; until you trust me to make changes without prior approval i can highlight proposed changes on a 'word' attachment in one e-mail, then when i have approval, i will send an altered copy. i usually have everything back to you by the next day. it is much quicker to just make the changes then return it but a story is an author's 'baby' and i understand that trust has to be earned. if you want i will be more than happy to send you a list of authors who i frequently beta for and a few who call on me to edit for them occasionally.

    about lemons...i won't read them. i have no problem with affection but i have a problem with the blow by blow details. i much prefer the 'ardent kiss' then cut to the waves crashing against the shore... call me old fashioned but the tease and hint of passion is more titillating to me than watching or reading about 'the act' in all its gory detail. i usually separate a story with a lemon as follows: kissing and hands up ~lemon warning~ hands down and any kind of penetration: oral/PIV/etc. ~lemon fini~.

    i usually beta on my spare time and my ulterior motive is that i get to read good stories by talented authors before they post!

    if you are interested in using me to proofread your work contact me

    you can write me at the general address listed on my profile page.

    thank you,
    ginny

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