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Reviews for Lovely Moon. . .

By : Bouken
  • From ANON - Nana on March 30, 2009
    Hey, you have the makings of a really good story line, but your grammar and spelling are terrible. I don't mean to be mean, but half the time I couldn't tell what you were trying to write. Try getting someone to proof-read it for you before you publish it. It would really help your story. Good job though. Update soon ^____^.
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  • From ANON - ^_^ on December 16, 2006
    Hi there!

    i'm a big fan of ayamexkouga so i'm glad somebody is writing a fic about them.

    While I like this fic, i would recommend that you proof read more and make use of the dictionary.

    There were a few mistakes, such as singular/plural (wolfes rather than wolves), and spelling issues.

    in case you're new to english, i have to say that the overall fic is still very cute.

    -Haruko
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  • From YourouzokuAlpha on October 14, 2006
    I think that your idea is very creative, and you have gotten off to a good start. First person point of view can be a little challenging... lol... I would know from writing August. ^_~ But keep up the good work, and remember not to rush things. I learned that the hard way... lol. Keep doing a good job and thank you for leaving me reviews for August. ^_~
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  • From ANON - red moon on October 09, 2006
    I love your story. I just love Kouga and Ayame pairings.Update please
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