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Reviews for Lost Hopes

By : miyu557
  • From ANON - tortured_insanity on October 09, 2006
    Yay! new chapter!
    Kagome needs to be bitch-slapped, lol

    Waiting for the next one, hurry up please. ^_^
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  • From ANON - kelly on October 09, 2006
    KYA!!!! i've been waiting for a new chapter and there's finally one! hehehe, kagome finally got what was coming to her, and i like how you got the others to describe it to her, it was a lot of fun to read. now we just need to find out how inuyasha's doing, and i'm so glad that sango gets to go, cause she is a really nice person. ^_^ anyways, keep up the awesome writing!
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  • From ANON - Shadowwolf on October 09, 2006
    Excellent. I was happy to see another posting to this story. There were only a few minor spelling or grammar errors that happened towards the bottom half of the story. You or your typist (I beleive you had a hand injury, unless I have you confused with someone else) would need to let your beta reader/editor take a little more care with it. However those little slips did not detract from the story overall.

    For Example:
    Kouga studied them silently for a moment, eyes flicking from a befuddled yet enraged Kagome to the obviously distressed and confused Sango and Miroku to more.

    Corrected copy:
    Kouga studied them silently for a moment, eyes flicking from a befuddled yet enraged Kagome to the obviously distressed and confused Sango and Miroku once more.
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  • From ANON - Silence on October 08, 2006
    Oh gods! So good. Poor Inu, he's having such a hard time. This time, though, this time everything will be right, right? Please? And Kagome so deserved that. She's had it coming a long time now.

    I've been gone for a while and haven't had the chance to catch up. I want to say that you're doing an excellent job.

    ~Silence~
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  • From ANON - nette on October 08, 2006
    yay im glad to see another chapter up. yes the bitch known as kagome got what she deserved. i luved how you had sango set the record straight between them, that was priceless. cant wait to read more. uodate soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 08, 2006
    Wow,double wow,and way to go Sango for finally spelling it out for Kagome.I noticed it didn't sink in that the first child dies to either Kagome or Sango.Oh boy when it does,I can't wait for the others wolves to get a hold of Kagome.You write very well and are still leaving me on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter.
    Very Well Done
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  • From ANON - bunsdarien on October 08, 2006
    Finally putting Kagome in her place where she belongs. Still want Kouga to seriously maim her hide:) Keep it up. Still can't wait until the pup is born.
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  • From ANON - Fluffy on October 08, 2006
    OOooooooooo and she's still high and mighty.....X_X'''' I really really can not wait to see what they do to her. Great chapter btw. As always I love your updates. ^_^

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  • From ANON - yaoigurl91 on October 08, 2006
    YAY! you updated! Kagome is such a bitch! She needs to get her ass kicked for treating inuyasha that way! in in luv with this story and your a great author. Please update when you can!
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